The best advantage of a walker is that is allows people to listen to music and radio programs anytime and anywhere. Whenever you are jogging or waiting for a bus, you can kill time by listening to music if feeling bored. Better yet, it won't disturb others if your increase the volume. However, some doctors start to worry that more and more
people will suffer from listening loss if they form the habit of listening to a walker for a long time.
2. 寫作 (150-180字)
Kevin C. Liu
No. 20 Dali St., 3F
April 3, 2000
Formosa Features Magazine
36 Sanmin Road
Yungho City, Taipei
My name is Kevin C. Liu. For the sake of economic recession, I just got the sack last month. Now I am pounding the pavement in search of another computer programming job.
Seeing the advertisement of your company, I have an interest in it since there is a job offer for computer programmer. Basically, I apply for this position for two reasons. First of all, since I have passion for computer programming, it is always in my blood, acting as my forte. Second, I'd worked for my previous company for more than five years. Therefore, I have experience in this job. That is, everything about computer programming will absolutely be under my control. Though I just got laid off, I'm not going to take this lying down. Instead, I will exert myself to it.
Brimming with confidence rather than having butterflies in my stomach, I am all set to get qualified. After qualification, I am expecting NT$70,000 per month and read to start my work in three days. I'm looking forward to hear from you. Thank you for your time and attention.
Kevin C. Liu
痾... 不方便批改嗎 = =?....
我真的很怕碰到這樣的回答耶 = =
- 7 年前最佳解答
Your essay has a lot of informal and negative words/phrases/sentences. In formal cover letters, you should avoid informal language and any negative content. You also have quite a lot of basic grammar errors. I suggest you brush up your grammar.
Let me show you an example of a better opening:
My name is Kevin C. Liu. I have recently graduated from my master's in xxx, so I am looking for computer programming positions. I came across your advertisement for a computer programmer and I would like to show you how my qualifications meet your needs precisely.
I think it's best you first familiarize yourself with "how to write a good cover letter/email". That might help in future similar writing questions.
I share below a sample cover letter for your reference:
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- 匿名使用者7 年前
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- 匿名使用者7 年前