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凱西 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

英文自傳,求修正

如題,擔心文法錯誤故希望網友幫忙~謝謝!!^^

Autobiography

It is my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself to you.

My name is 00. I 'm 00 years old . I was born in Taoyuan County. My father is a simple person,my mother has a mild personality; she is a good housewife.

I was brought up in a healthy atmosphere and environment, so I have a positive outlook on life.

When I was a child, my parents paid much attention to the development of my personality. They were strict with me, "Actions speak louder than words" and “Better give than take”

was their philosophy of educating me. Therefore, their good deeds influenced me very much.

I am optimistic and always willing to learn new things. In my free time, I like reading to increase my knowledge or relaxing to music and seeing movies.

I have years of experience as a human resources .I have successfully conducted staff recruitment, training and employee relations support services to cope with the companys expansion. When I am responsible for a project, I work hard to complete it and solve problems .

To learn new skills, and utilize those already obtained, in an interesting and challenging work environment is my main objective. Maintaining clear and constant communication is one of my strong points.

We are in a changing era, and always need to be able to adapt and acquire new professional knowledge,

but I believe the most basic mindset and spirit we require do not change.

I am eager for the opportunity to give my skills to your company. I believe my rigorous attitude and constant desire to learn more will serve your company well.

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  • 7 年前
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    Autobiography

    It is my pleasure to have this opportunity to introduce myself to you.

    My name is 00, I 'm 00 years old, I was born in Taoyuan County, my father is a simple person, my mother has a mild personality, she is a good housewife.

    I was brought up in an environment with healthy atmosphere and environment, so I have a positive outlook on life.

    When I was a child, my parents paid much attentions to the development of my personality, they were strict with me, "Actions speak louder than words" and “Better give than take”

    was their philosophies of educating me. Therefore, their good deeds influenced me very much.

    I am optimistic and always willing to learn new things. In my free time, I like reading to increase my knowledge or relaxed to listen music and seeing movies.

    I have years of experience as a in human resources, I have and successfully conducted staff recruitment, training and employee relations supporting services to cope with the company’s expansion. When I am was responsible for a project, I always worked hard to complete it and solved the problems.

    To learn new skills and utilize those ones already obtained, in to an interesting and challenging working environment is my main objective and maintaining a clear and constant communication is one of my strong points.

    We are living in a changeful era, and always need to be able to adapt and acquire new professional knowledge, but I believe the most basic mindset and spirit we require do will not change.

    I am eager for having the opportunity to give perform my skills to your company and I believe my rigorous attitude and constant desire to for learning more will serve your company well.

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