simth 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

請英文高手幫忙修正一下這篇英文的詞性和文法,感激不盡

作者提出了許多例子,告訴讀者,We see the obvious and visible consequences, not the invisible and less obvious ones. Yet those unseen consequences can be more meaningful.。我認為這個想法是對的,但卻是不切實際的,這是一種追求完美的想法,書中說到,政府撥經費給受到颱風的受災戶,只是為了贏得選票,而這些經費可能是從補助癌症病患的經費而來,雖然這對癌症患者不公平,但人性如此,這種事在未來還是會一直發生,所以有的事都是一體兩面的。出版商也只願意為成功者出版,而不會願意為失敗者出版,絕大部份的人只願做對自已有利的事,尤其是商人,這也導致了,人們只會記得成功者,而不會知道失敗者。

The author cites many instances to show the readers that "We see the obvious and visible consequences, not the invisible and less obvious ones. Yet those unseen consequences can be more meaningful." I agree this thinking is on the right track but unrealistic. This is idealism. The book mentioned when the government disbursed funds to help typhoon victims it is only trying to win votes. Because these funds maybe diverted from cancer victims' budget. Although this is unfair to the cancer patients, but that's human nature. It will happen in the future again and again. So there are are two sides to every coin. Publishers are only willing to publish success stories, but not losers. Most people only want to do things that are beneficial to themselves, especially businessmen. Therefore, people only remember winners but not losers.

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  • 7 年前
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    作者提出了許多例子,告訴讀者,We see the obvious and visible consequences, not the invisible and less obvious ones. Yet those unseen consequences can be more meaningful.。

    The author cites many instances to show tell (因後面有實在的一段話,用tell較為切合實際)the readers that "We see the obvious and visible consequences, not the invisible and less obvious ones. Yet those unseen consequences can be more meaningful. " 我認為這個想法是對的,但卻是不切實際的,這是一種追求完美的想法,書中說到,政府撥經費給受到颱風的受災戶,只是為了贏得選票,而這些經費可能是從補助癌症病患的經費而來,雖然這對癌症患者不公平,但人性如此,這種事在未來還是會一直發生,所以有的事都是一體兩面的。I agree consider that this thinking is on the right track but unrealistic. This, which is idealism. The book mentioned when the government disbursed funds to help the typhoon victims it is was only trying to win the votes. Because these funds maybe diverted from cancer victims' budgets. Although it is unfair to the cancer patients, but because that's human nature. It will happen in the future again and again. So everything has there are two sides to every like a coin.

    出版商也只願意為成功者出版,而不會願意為失敗者出版,絕大部份的人只願做對自已有利的事,尤其是商人,這也導致了,人們只會記得成功者,而不會知道失敗者。Publishers are only not willing to publish success the stories of losers but not losers only the winners’. Most people , especially businessmen , only want to do the things that are beneficial to themselves, especially businessmen. Therefore, people only remember winners but not without losers

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  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前

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