simth 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

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Authors made numerous examples, tells the reader that We see the obvious and visible consequences, not the invisible and less obvious ones. Yet those unseen consequences can be more meaningful.。 Book says, funds allocated by the Government to victims of typhoons, but in order to win votes, and these requirements may come from grant funding for a cancer patient. Authors do not agree with such self-interest behavior of crocodile tears. But I disagree with the views of the author, as in many emergencies, emergency response must be made immediately, such as: Typhoon disaster, the Government has the obligation to immediately help the victims rebuild their homes, and these funds must be obtained from elsewhere, because the Government's annual budget is limited. To cite an example: a company is facing a financial crisis, when it comes to lending any money, may was expected to give employees a raise and bonus benefits as working capital, though it feels unfair employee, but in a time of crisis, companies still need to get to a trading fund is the most important.

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    Error and correction in Grammar and figures of Speech:-

    Authors have made numerous examples, telling readers that we see the obvious and visible consequences; not the invisible and less obvious ones.Yet these unseen consequences can be more meaningful.

    --The book says that funds allocated by the Govt. to victims of typhoons in order to win votes. These (resource) may come from the grant-funding for a cancer patient. Authors do agree with such self-interest behaviour as crocodile tears.But I disagree with the view of authors. As in many emergencies, response must be made immediately, such as the Typhoon disater. The Govt. has the obligation to immediately help the victims rebuild their homes. These funds must be obtained from elsewhere; because the Govt. annual budget is limited.

    --To cite an example:-A company is facing a financial crisis. When it comes to lending any money,what was expected to give employees for a raise and bonus benefits will be switched as working capital. Though it feels rather unfair to employees, but in time of crisis, the companies need to get a trading fund to be the more important decision.(190 words)

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