frantic_tin 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

英文句文法問題

While there is no standard criteria for such definitions, the designation could contribute to de-stigmatizing obesity, lead to wider coverage of treatments by insurers and greater willingness by doctors to address and treat the condition among their patients.

想請問 第1句while之後句子 主詞為的the designation 動詞為could contribute 第三句 不過lead 為什麼沒加and

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想請問回答者呆子 如果改成 , leading to 變成形容詞子句不行嗎

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也就是 說contribute跟 lead 為2個動詞 而用逗號取代and 但也可改成分詞構句 另外後面by doctors(in order省略) to 街2個不定詞 1為address 2為treat 部隻這樣解釋對不對

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    句意上來看, 版主理解才是對的 +1.

    否則, 第二段 coverage and willingness to adress 沒有意義

    以及第三段 the designation could contribute to treat the condition among their patients.

    也沒有意義.

    2013-12-29 05:35:27 補充:

    "greater willingness by doctors to address and treat the condition among their patients" 這部分要一起看:

    讓醫生有更高的意願來診斷及治療病人的疾病.

    2013-12-29 05:48:02 補充:

    his willingness to do something 跟his willingness in order to do something

    意義上有點不同

    I am willing to go to school. (我願意去上學)

    I am willing in order to go to school. (為了去上學, 我願意, 但是願意做什麼沒有交代)

    此處不可加上in order

    2013-12-29 06:50:06 補充:

    Viewpoint: Defining Obesity as a Disease May Do More Harm Than Good

    The label is supposed to improve awareness and treatments for the condition, but similar proclamations about alcoholism and other addictions haven’t been so successful.Rejecting the advice of one of its own committees, the American Medical Association (AMA) will now classify obesity, which affects about one-third of Americans, as a disease, similar to diabetes and cancer. While there is no standard criteria for such definitions, the designation could contribute to de-stigmatizing obesity, lead to wider coverage of treatments by insurers — Medicare and other insurers currently exclude reimbursement for weight-loss drugs — and greater willingness by doctors to address and treat the condition among their patients.雖然對肥胖症的定義沒有標準的準則, 這個正名對於肥胖的去汙名化可能會有幫助, 這讓保險公司醫療給付的範圍擴大—目前健保和其他的保險公司對減重藥是沒有給付的—也使醫生更願意診斷和治療他們的病人肥胖的疾病.

    備註:

    1. 這裡lead應該改成 leading文法才對.

    2. 注意contribute to 後面跟的是動名詞, 不是不定詞. 所以將lead to 之前的逗號改成 and 文法上也是不對的.

    3. greater willingness by doctors to address and treat the condition among their patients 整個要一起看才有意義.

  • 7 年前

    這句話版主的理解才是正確的。 lead 必須改成 leading 才符合文法。 最後的 and 是連接 address and treat the condition。 不然要 address what?

  • Louis
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    本人讚同prisoner26535的分析。

    wider coverage of treatments by insurers

    greater willingness by doctors to address

    這兩個是平行對稱的東西:~er xxx by yyy

    所以用對等連接詞and相連

    另外句裡的三個對等的述部也是用了and

    所以才會看到兩組and

    2013-12-28 17:18:31 補充:

    用對等連接詞連接數個述部,表示它們的重要性相等(本句有數個焦點),如果將某個述部改成修飾語(分詞構句),即弱化其重要性(次於述吲)。

  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    7 年前

    While there is no standard criterion for such definitions, the designation could contribute to de-stigmatizing obesity, lead to wider coverage of treatments by insurers and greater willingness by doctors to address and treat the condition among their patients. 1. 逗號將主要及從屬子句區隔,如While 所引導從屬子句與the designation引導主要子句區隔使用2. 逗號取代AND ,本句二個動詞片語contribute to de-stigmatizing obesity及 lead to wider coverage-----以逗號區隔。例如We have one dog, one cat and two birds.= We have one dog, one cat , two birds.但逗號有時是連接同位語I spoke to the boys, Sam and John.(二個人),I spoke to the boys, Sam , John.(四人以上)3. 本句因and好幾個,為免混淆,所以有第二點方式使用,如After eating the boy left the table.(在吃完小孩後,無逗號意思曲解),正確寫法:After eating ,the boy left the table.4. AND 是連接詞以逗號取代功能相同,可前後接單字、片語、子句等

    2013-12-28 14:54:37 補充:

    (in order省略) to address and treat the condition among their patients.本不定詞片語當副詞用修飾動詞 lead

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  • 7 年前

    我當初也有這麼想 不過我覺得好像是(by doctors to address and treat among their patients) 也就是doctors to address 跟 to treat 請問這樣句型結構 不行嗎

  • 7 年前

    While there is no standard criteria for such definitions, the designation [could (contribute to de-stigmatizing obesity), (lead to wider coverage of treatments by insurers and greater willingness by doctors to address) and (treat the condition among their patients)].

  • 7 年前

    因在前面你已加逗號了

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