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(以下是我自己用英文打的一篇小文章,希望可以幫忙訂正....文法上或是口語上更順暢) 當我年輕時,我夢想自己製作著一艘紙船和抦持著一把雷射劍和金色的盾,但是我知道這並不會實現,為什麼不會實現?因為一艘紙做的船是否可以漂浮在海上這麼長時間,我想答案已經很明顯了,對吧?所以我決定把這不切實際的事情丟去,現在我已經15歲了,也許我不知道我該去哪裡,但我會在一次建照自己的夢想. When I was young, I dreamed I could make and driving a paper ship, and then holding laser sword and golden shelf in my... 顯示更多 (以下是我自己用英文打的一篇小文章,希望可以幫忙訂正....文法上或是口語上更順暢)

當我年輕時,我夢想自己製作著一艘紙船和抦持著一把雷射劍和金色的盾,但是我知道這並不會實現,為什麼不會實現?因為一艘紙做的船是否可以漂浮在海上這麼長時間,我想答案已經很明顯了,對吧?所以我決定把這不切實際的事情丟去,現在我已經15歲了,也許我不知道我該去哪裡,但我會在一次建照自己的夢想.

When I was young, I dreamed I could make and driving a paper ship, and then holding laser sword and golden shelf in my hand, but I know that will not work, why will not work? Because of a ship made of paper whether could float on the sea so long time or not? I think the answer clear already, right? So I decided to throw this unrealistic matter away, I’m fifteen years old, maybe I don’t know to where I will go, but I will create my future hard again.

P.S. 不要去想追求夢想的過程多麼辛苦 (這句英文怎麼翻???)
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