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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

中翻英 Chinese into English

(以下是我自己用英文打的一篇小文章,希望可以幫忙訂正....文法上或是口語上更順暢)

當我年輕時,我夢想自己製作著一艘紙船和抦持著一把雷射劍和金色的盾,但是我知道這並不會實現,為什麼不會實現?因為一艘紙做的船是否可以漂浮在海上這麼長時間,我想答案已經很明顯了,對吧?所以我決定把這不切實際的事情丟去,現在我已經15歲了,也許我不知道我該去哪裡,但我會在一次建照自己的夢想.

When I was young, I dreamed I could make and driving a paper ship, and then holding laser sword and golden shelf in my hand, but I know that will not work, why will not work? Because of a ship made of paper whether could float on the sea so long time or not? I think the answer clear already, right? So I decided to throw this unrealistic matter away, I’m fifteen years old, maybe I don’t know to where I will go, but I will create my future hard again.

P.S. 不要去想追求夢想的過程多麼辛苦 (這句英文怎麼翻???)

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    6 年前
    最佳解答

    我稍微改一下你原本文法錯誤的地方, 然後提供我自己的版本給你參考:

    When I was young, I dreamed I could make and driveing a paper ship, and thenon which I could holding a laser sword and a golden shelfshield in my hand. Bbut I know that will not work. Why will not workis that? Because ofwhether a ship made of paper whether could float on the sea for so long a time or not is still a question. I think the answer is clear alreadyenough, right? So I decided to throw this unrealistic matterthought away,. I’m fifteen years old,. Maybe I don’t know to where I will go, but I will create my own future hard again.

    我的版本:

    When I was young, I had a dream that one day I might sail a self-made paper boat, wielding a laser sword and holding a golden shield on it. But now, I know it's just an unrealistic dream. Why? The answer is quite clear that a paper boat won't be able to float on the sea for so long a time. Therefore, I've decided to get rid of the crazy idea now that I am fifteen. Maybe I don't know where to go, but I certainly will build my dream once again.

    不要去想追求夢想的過程多麼辛苦

    Don't think about how hard it is to pursue your dream.

    Note:

    for so long a time 也可替換成 for such a long time

    2014-01-13 19:03:22 補充:

    When I was young 應該要改成 When I was little 比較好, 畢竟你才15歲. 講When I was young 很奇怪. Because you are still young.

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