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boy 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

求英文高手幫修正中翻英!(急)

行事曆是個人日常生活中時常使用的工具,安排規劃個人日常生活中的大小事務,行事曆已成為非常貼近個人的使用工具。 電腦行事曆比記錄在紙上更具環保性,從過去透過日曆、桌曆、演變至今經由電腦與行動裝置的結合,已經是許多人不可或缺的。 透過行事曆規劃行程可以更有效率的運用自己的時間,讓使用者每天都可以更方便的運用每一天的時間來安排自己的行程。 行事曆的多功能化可讓使用者在使用行事曆上更具彈性、多樣化,增加行事曆的功能可讓使用者更為方便且擁有更多的功能可以選擇。

Calender is a common and useful daily life tool, it helps us arrange all sorts of plans in life,

And has gradually already become something very inseperable.

Calender on computers are more environmental than ever.

We used to use calenders that hang on walls, put on desks, but now it has merged with mobiles, which is becoming something many people can't live without.

By using a calender, you're time will be more efficiently used , allowing you to plan your everyday schedules more easily.

Nowadays calenders are multifunctional, devoloping with more elasticity and diversity, which is more convenient for calender users, providing more different options to choose from.

我不知道哪裡錯了...

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    1. 行事曆是個人日常生活中時常使用的工具,[安排規劃個人日常生活中的大小事務,行事曆已成為非常貼近個人的使用工具。]

    (你) Calender is a common and useful daily life tool, [it helps us arrange all sorts of plans in life,

    And has gradually already become something very inseperable.]

    中文和英文括起來部分,其實是倒裝(可能也是從英文翻過去的?),所以邏輯應該是"行事曆已成為非常貼近個人的使用工具,能安排規劃個人日常生活中的大小事務" 這樣翻起來應該會比較順

    (我) Calender is very common in our daily life. It has already become something indispensable, which we can arrange all sorts of plans on it.

    2. 電腦行事曆比記錄在紙上更具環保性,從過去透過日曆、桌曆、演變至今經由電腦與行動裝置的結合,已經是許多人不可或缺的。

    (你) Calender on computers are more environmental (environmental的意思比較是說"環境的",所以後面應該在加個friendly就是有環保性) than ever.

    We used to use calenders that hang on walls, put on desks, but now it has merged with mobiles, which is becoming something many people can't live without.

    有些地方有漏翻,可能都要翻出來比較好

    (我) Computer calendars are more environmentally friendly than paper calendars.

    We used to hang our calendars on walls or put them on desks. However, now, calendars merge with computers and mobile devices, which have become something people can't live without.

    3. 透過行事曆規劃行程可以更有效率的運用自己的時間,讓使用者每天都可以更方便的運用每一天的時間來安排自己的行程。

    (你) By using a calender, you're time will be more efficiently used , allowing you to plan your everyday schedules more easily.

    盡量用第三人稱, ex: user, people...

    (我) By using a calender, people may use their time more efficiently. Moreover, it allows users to plan their everyday schedules more easily.

    4. 行事曆的多功能化可讓使用者在使用行事曆上更具彈性、多樣化,增加行事曆的功能可讓使用者更為方便且擁有更多的功能可以選擇。

    (你) Nowadays calenders are multifunctional, devoloping with more elasticity and diversity, which is more convenient for calender users, providing more different options to choose from.

    (我) Nowadays, due to the multifunction of the calendars, users may use them in flexible and various ways. What's more, adding more functions to the calendars may provide the users with more convenience and different options to choose from.

    2014-01-15 11:59:39 補充:

    Beth thanks! Im flattered haha>

    參考資料: 自己
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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    6 年前

    sandwich biscuit, well done!

    You put many good words such as environment-friendly, indispensable, and flexible.

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  • 6 年前

    日曆: calendar

    not calender

    行事曆: scheduler

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