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Question

想請問這句子的文法，有疑問的地方我打上編號。

Due to hot season for the spring resort, (1)so they requested to pay by credit card

when (2)make reservation, would you please provide (3)you and James's credit card # and all details,

(4)so I can complete the reservation.

(1)這邊須要加so嗎？可以不加嗎？

(2)是不是要用 when making a reservation 才對？

(3)用you對嗎？還是要改your？

(4)這邊用so是否ok？有更好的說法嗎？

Answer 1

最佳解答

(1)不用

(2)是

(3)you 或可用 both of your credit cards

(4)so是最好的用法

Due to hot season for the spring resort, they requested to pay by credit card.

When making a reservation, would you please provide you and James's credit card and all details, so I can complete the reservation.

Answer 2

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▶▶http://misshare168.pixnet.net/blog/post/86950298

Answer 3

(4)的部分:

, so 改成 so that

不要逗號.

Answer 4

可改寫如下：

Due to the busy season in spring resorts, all customers now must pay in advance while making reservation.

Would you please let me have James' and your credit card number and traveling details, so I can book rooms for you?

2014-02-14 16:38:37 補充：

第一句或可改成：Due to the busy season in spring resorts, all customers now must provide their credit card numbers while making reservation.