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涂凱傑 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

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It narrates that the ocean plays a vital role in the daily lives of the Tao people on account of the geographical environment of Orchid Island.The soil being uneven and infertile,the Tao people turned to develop to the ocean so as to retain a sufficient intake of nutrition.Over the years,they have realized not only bountiful catching but the conservation of marine life is important.Every years from March to June,the waters around Orchid Island are frequented by schools of flying fish brought by the Kuroshio Current,at which point the Tao residents catch fish.In tradition,they usually build plank boats by using wood-carving skills,to ward off evil spirits and pray for blessings,which as well as many ceremonies now is their most precious cultural heritage.Needless to say,the Tao have created a unique,ocean-oriented culture.With technology advancing so prompt,the lifestyle of the Tao has changed to some degree.For instance,plank boats are replaced with engine-powered rafts,the development of local tourism has threatened the indigenous environment,not to mention the nuclear waste stored on Orchid Island.Now,how to reach the balance between environment and economy,is the most urgent problem that they are faced with.

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It narrates that the ocean plays a vital role in the daily lives of the Tao people on account of the geographical environment of Orchid Island.The soil being uneven and infertile,the Tao people turned to develop to the ocean so as to retain a sufficient intake of nutrition.Over the years,they have

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realized not only bountiful catching but the conservation of marine life is important.Every year from March to June,the waters around Orchid Island are frequented by schools of flying fish brought by the Kuroshio Current,at which point the Tao residents catch fish.In tradition,

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to ward off evil spirits and pray for blessings,they usually build plank boats by using wood-carving skills for catching at a time, ,which as well as many ceremonies is their most precious cultural heritage

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Needless to say,the Tao have created a unique,ocean-oriented culture.However,with technology advancing so prompt,the lifestyle of the Tao has changed to some degree.For instance,plank boats are replaced with engine-powered rafts,

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the development of local tourism has threatened the indigenous environment,not to mention the nuclear waste stored on Orchid Island.Currently,how to reach the balance between environment and economy is the most urgent problem that they are faced with.

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抱歉 補充的才是我最新更正的 最上層的就請忽略吧

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The Tao people turned to develop to the ocean真的沒問題嗎XD

我是想說這句 達悟人轉而向海洋發展 這句話感覺有點矛盾

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  • 6 年前
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    It narrates that the ocean plays a vital role in the daily lives of the Tao people. On the account of the geographical environment of Orchid Island, because the soil is dry and lack nutrients, the Tao people turned to fishing to obtain nutritious food resource. Over the years, they have realized in order for bountiful catching, the conservation of marine life is important. Every year from March to June, the waters around Orchid Island are visited by schools of flying fish, brought by the Kuroshio Current, which is a good time for Tao residents to go fishing. In addition, to ward off evil spirits and pray for blessing when sailing, they would build up plank boats by using wood-carving skills. This has become a tradition for Tao people, as well as many ceremonies being celebrated yearly. Needless to say, the Tao have created a unique, ocean-oriented culture. However, as technology advancing so promptly, the lifestyle of the Tao has changed to adapt the current culture. For instance, plank boats are replaced with engine-powered rafts, the development of local tourism has threatened the indigenous environment, not to mention the nuclear waste stored on Orchid Island has threatened the health of Tao people. Currently, how to reach the balance between environment and economy is the most urgent problem they are faced with.

    我讀過去的時候覺得對但念起來真的很不順, 你想把太多"大詞"給寫進去反而不好. 你的逗號和句點也沒有標好反而變成了"run-on sentences" 有些字雖然感覺中文那樣翻很對但帶到英文句字裡就很不對. 但我覺得你的重點抓得很好, 我讀得很懂 很清楚你在講什麼.

    加油喔

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  • 6 年前

    It narrates that the ocean plays a vital role in the daily lives of the Tao people on account of the geographical environment of Orchid Island. The Because its soil is being uneven and infertile, the Tao people turned to explore and develop to the ocean so as in order to retain a sufficient intake of nutrition. Over the years, they have realized the important thing is not only bountiful catching but also the conservation of marine lives is important. Every year, from March to June, the waters around Orchid Island are frequented by schools of flying fishes which brought by the Kuroshio Current, at which this point, the Tao residents always can catch fishes.

    In tradition to the ceremonies of warding off evil spirits and praying for blessings, they usually build plank boats by using wood-carving skills for catching at a time, which as well as many ceremonies both is are their most precious cultural heritage.

    Needless to say, the Tao have created a an unique ocean-oriented culture. However, with the technology advancing so promptly, the lifestyle of the Tao has been changed to some degree. For instance, the plank boats are replaced with by engine-powered rafts.

    The development of local tourism has threatened the indigenous environment, not to mention the nuclear waste stored on Orchid Island. So currently, how to reach the balance between environment and economy is the most urgent problem that they are facing faced with.

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  • 6 年前

    哈哈哈,公主是在騙糧嗎?

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  • 6 年前

    看起來是沒有問題的!好了,就醬下課吧!

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