發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

英文翻譯-小文章請求看有無錯誤

有勞對英文有專精的朋友幫我看下面文章有無錯誤。如有請幫我修正,謝謝您。

Currently, I am in the Army. Here as substitute military service in Changhua.

Because it's mandatory for all male adults in Taiwan.

The mandatory service will take about a year.

I'll be home for a few days once in awhile, but mostly I'll be working here.

There are people always been great to me and often treat to me.

This photo is taken when we are celebration Lantern Festival Parade.

For me, it is a meaningful event forward,

We are handmade creating a balloon horse or sword for children.

When I saw the children smile ,Everything is worth .

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  • 7 年前
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    I am currently in the army; the substitute military service in Changhua. The 1-year service is mandatory for all male adults in Taiwan. Once in a while I'll be home for a few days, but most of the time I'll be working there. The people there have always been great and treat me well.

    This photo is taken at the Lantern Festival Parade. It's a meaningful event for me. We're hand-making balloon horses or swords for children; and when I see them smile, everything is worth it.

    希望有幫助!

    幫你把句子結構修好; 大致上無誤,文法根結構我都幫你修好了! :)

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