請幫我訂正一下中英短文 (急!!) 20點
Hi! Thank you for spending some time watching my resume. My name is XXX, and I graduated at XXX. My subject is English. I want to find a job about pet groomer assistant. Although this job is not related to English, I love pet very much and decide to do the job. To dress up for pet, they can be pretty just like human.
When I was a kid, I kept cats or dogs. I like to dress up them at that time. After I was a senior high student, I began to do some basic beauty for them. Like cut their fur and nails, or take a shower, even do some style. Now these things are very easy for me. To be a pet groomer assistant, you must have a heart loving the pet besides having profession. You also have to be patient for them.
I have been taking care for my pets for eight years, and I am good at doing basic beauty. In the future, I also hope I will get the certification by being the groomer assistant and do my best to pet and company. You don’t choose me. I don’t know who you want to choose.
因為沒有持續練習英文 導致現在英文都退步了好多!! 很多文法都忘光光了
請好心人幫忙我訂正一下 看有沒有不對的地方!! 感激不盡!!
- 6 年前最佳解答
To whom it may concern:
Hi there! I greatly appreciate the time put forward for reading ((讀的東西不能用watching, you may use reading or viewing)) my resume, thank you. My name is XXX, and I have graduated from XXX, where I majored in English. ((Major 是主修科目的意思)) I would like to apply for the position of a pet groomer assistant. Although such role is not directly related to English, I have determinedly decided to enter this field as an animal lover. I enjoy grooming and dressing up pets, so they can be just as beautiful as humans in their own way.
I have had several pet dogs and cats when I was young, (('kid' is an informal term)) and back then I absolutely adored dressing them up. After I have entered my freshman year as a senior high school student, ((senior high 是 senior high school 的簡版)) I began to practice doing some basic grooming jobs for them, from hair, and nail trimming, bathing to styling them, thus now I am very proficient at these things. ((grooming 就是寵物美容的意思)) As a pet groomer assistant, besides the required professional qualities, it is crucial to have a devotion towards animals, and also a lot of patience.
I have been taking care of ((not for)) my pets for eight years, and I am very familiar with all the basic grooming jobs. I anticipate that in the near future, I will be able to attain a professional certification as a groomer by enhancing my current skills as a groomer assistant. I believe that I am the most suitable candidate for this position, thank you for considering.
((如果你不選我，那你要選誰呢？ 中文聽起來很ok 可是You don’t choose me. I don’t know who you want to choose. 就有一點欠缺禮貌, 不同的feel 你懂, 所以我稍微改了一句))
hello helloc: 我有把一些句子並起來,這樣會比較順喔!
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- 匿名使用者6 年前
- 6 年前
善心人士蘋果花了很多時間幫大大改, 看的出來底子不錯, 但小小的錯誤還是有, 用了太多逗號了. 英文和中文不同, 英文一句完就用一個句號.
其它小地方, 我會覺得when I was “younger” 或 when I was a child都可以. When I was young 會感覺現在已經很老了.
這句怪怪的: it is crucial to have “a devotion towards animals”.
“如果你不選我，那你要選誰呢？”這句很不建議, 如果我是主管, 原本要選你, 看到這句就傻了.