匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

請幫我訂正一下中英短文 (急!!) 20點

您好,非常感謝貴公司能用這點時間來觀看我的履歷。我的名字叫XXX,畢業於XXX大學,並且主修英文,我想應徵的職務是寵物美容師助理,雖然這個職務和英文沒有相關,但是由於我非常的喜愛寵物,所以我決定走向這項行業,為寵物們打扮,讓他們可以跟人一樣變得漂亮。

Hi! Thank you for spending some time watching my resume. My name is XXX, and I graduated at XXX. My subject is English. I want to find a job about pet groomer assistant. Although this job is not related to English, I love pet very much and decide to do the job. To dress up for pet, they can be pretty just like human.

從小我自己就有養貓和狗,在那時候我就喜歡為我的寵物打扮,直到升上高中後我開始替他們做一些基礎的美容,像是剃毛、剪指甲、洗澡,甚至是做一些小造型。現在這些事情對我來說是非常輕而易舉的。身為一位美容師助理,除了專業之外,必須要有一顆愛寵物的心,對他們也要非常的有耐心。

When I was a kid, I kept cats or dogs. I like to dress up them at that time. After I was a senior high student, I began to do some basic beauty for them. Like cut their fur and nails, or take a shower, even do some style. Now these things are very easy for me. To be a pet groomer assistant, you must have a heart loving the pet besides having profession. You also have to be patient for them.

我照料了我的寵物長達8年,基礎的美容我都非常的熟練。在未來我也希望能藉由擔任寵物美容師助理的經驗,去考取美容師證照,而成為一位更專業的美容師,為公司盡一份心。如果你不選我,那你要選誰呢?

I have been taking care for my pets for eight years, and I am good at doing basic beauty. In the future, I also hope I will get the certification by being the groomer assistant and do my best to pet and company. You don’t choose me. I don’t know who you want to choose.

因為沒有持續練習英文 導致現在英文都退步了好多!! 很多文法都忘光光了

請好心人幫忙我訂正一下 看有沒有不對的地方!! 感激不盡!!

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  • 6 年前
    最佳解答

    To whom it may concern:

    Hi there! I greatly appreciate the time put forward for reading ((讀的東西不能用watching, you may use reading or viewing)) my resume, thank you. My name is XXX, and I have graduated from XXX, where I majored in English. ((Major 是主修科目的意思)) I would like to apply for the position of a pet groomer assistant. Although such role is not directly related to English, I have determinedly decided to enter this field as an animal lover. I enjoy grooming and dressing up pets, so they can be just as beautiful as humans in their own way.

    I have had several pet dogs and cats when I was young, (('kid' is an informal term)) and back then I absolutely adored dressing them up. After I have entered my freshman year as a senior high school student, ((senior high 是 senior high school 的簡版)) I began to practice doing some basic grooming jobs for them, from hair, and nail trimming, bathing to styling them, thus now I am very proficient at these things. ((grooming 就是寵物美容的意思)) As a pet groomer assistant, besides the required professional qualities, it is crucial to have a devotion towards animals, and also a lot of patience.

    I have been taking care of ((not for)) my pets for eight years, and I am very familiar with all the basic grooming jobs. I anticipate that in the near future, I will be able to attain a professional certification as a groomer by enhancing my current skills as a groomer assistant. I believe that I am the most suitable candidate for this position, thank you for considering.

    ((如果你不選我,那你要選誰呢? 中文聽起來很ok 可是You don’t choose me. I don’t know who you want to choose. 就有一點欠缺禮貌, 不同的feel 你懂, 所以我稍微改了一句))

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    hello helloc: 我有把一些句子並起來,這樣會比較順喔!

    還有有些句子雖然翻譯的是很正確的,可畢竟還是有語言差異,

    所以顯得比較不正式. 在那方面我有做一些小修改.

    加油!Good luck with you application!

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  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

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  • 6 年前

    善心人士蘋果花了很多時間幫大大改, 看的出來底子不錯, 但小小的錯誤還是有, 用了太多逗號了. 英文和中文不同, 英文一句完就用一個句號.

    其它小地方, 我會覺得when I was “younger” 或 when I was a child都可以. When I was young 會感覺現在已經很老了.

    這句怪怪的: it is crucial to have “a devotion towards animals”.

    devotion不可數, 且通常接”to”.

    “如果你不選我,那你要選誰呢?”這句很不建議, 如果我是主管, 原本要選你, 看到這句就傻了.

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