茹茹 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

檢查英文自我介紹

How do you think about how old about me?

Many people think about I'm a junior high school student in Taiwan, but is not.

I'm sophomore in HungKuang University.

My hobbies are surfing the Internet and going hiking with my family.

During I stay here, I expect to visit the hospital in the USA and add to my knowledge by curriculum.

I am interesting in surgery and ICU , because when I was ten ,I had a lumpectomy surgery.

In the future, I will develop toward to be a scrubbing nurse or working in ICU .

After I graduate from college, I will work in medical center while study for a master's degree. Even obtain RN license

以下是上述內容的大致中文

你們認為我幾歲呢?

在台灣,許多人認為我是個國中生,但完全不

我是弘光科大的大二生

我的興趣是上網以及和家人一同出遊

待在這裡的期間,我希望能參訪美國的醫院,並藉由課程增加我的知識

我對手術房與ICU感興趣,因為在我10歲時,曾動過腫瘤切除手術

或許未來我會成為一名刷手護士或在ICU工作

於大學畢業後,我將一邊在醫學中心工作一邊攻讀碩士班,甚至是考取RN證照.

可以請大大們幫我看看英文單字用法,文法對不對,以及語序對不對。

因為將要於美國自我介紹,所以很擔心自己的破英文出糗

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  • 6 年前
    最佳解答

    What do you think about how old I am?

    In Taiwan, many people think that I'm a junior high school student, but it is not

    true.

    I'm a sophomore in HungKuang University.

    I have some hobbies, including surfing the Internet and going hiking with my

    family.

    In the period of staying here, I expect to visit the hospitals in the USA and widenmy knowledge with curriculum.

    I am interested in the surgeries and ICU, because when I was ten, I underwent a lumpectomy surgery.

    In the future, perhaps I will develop toward to be a scrubbing nurse or working in ICU .

    After I graduate from the college, I'm going to work in medical center while being studying for a master degree, and even obtain RN license.

    基本上我維持了整篇的原貌,只稍稍修改了幾個字,還有一小部分的句子

    不管英文好不好,重點是要展現出自信!加油!

    參考資料: Myself
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  • 6 年前

    參考下面的網址看看

    http://phi008780508.pixnet.net/blog

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  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

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  • 6 年前

    你們認為我幾歲呢?How old do you think I am?

    在台灣,許多人認為我是個國中生,但完全不 In Taiwan, many people think that I'm a middle school student, but that is not true.

    我是弘光科大的大二生 I'm a sophomore in Hung Kuang University.

    我的興趣是上網以及和家人一同出遊 My hobbies are surfing the internet and going hiking with my family

    待在這裡的期間,我希望能參訪美國的醫院,並藉由課程增加我的知識 During the period of my stay, I hope to visit the hospitals in the US. Also, gain knowledge through class lessons.

    我對手術房與ICU感興趣,因為在我10歲時,曾動過腫瘤切除手術 I am interested in the surgeries and ICU, because I've been through a lumpectomy surgery when I was 10.

    或許未來我會成為一名刷手護士或在ICU工作 In the future, I will develop towards being a scrubbing nurse or work in the ICU.

    於大學畢業後,我將一邊在醫學中心工作一邊攻讀碩士班,甚至是考取RN證照. After I graduate from university, I would work in the medical center while studying for a master's degree or even to obtain a RN license.

    補充: 國外國中通常會用"middle school",我是在台灣才聽到用"junior high school." Middle school 跟 junior high school 的差別在於 前者是小六到高二 因為制度不一樣,他們是國小五年,國中三年,高中四年 後者的junior high school就是國一到國三。我知道美國人一定聽得懂Middle school,但是junior high school我不確定他們會不會知道

    參考資料: 自己
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