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函函 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

英文自傳潤稿

我寫了一篇推甄研究所的英文自傳,但英文程度不是很好,請各位大師們幫幫我潤一潤稿,謝謝!!!!

以下是中文:

1.我叫______,今年即將畢業於______大學。大學三年的成績雖說不上非常頂尖,但還是有全班第四名,而且程式語言的課程我的成績經常是名列前茅。

2.我參與過教授的研究項目,叫做母語及外語作文系統,主要以PHP、HTML、Javascript網頁語言來開發,功能是讓外語作文可讓母語人士批改,加強學習非母語人士的外語學習效率。

3.大學專題是計算機視覺與遊戲的結合,是將遊戲人物置於遊戲場景中,此專題得到了系內專題競賽的第一名,最近也獲得了全台灣軟體競賽的決賽資格。而校外實習項目是協助企業開發線上兒童電子書網站,可讓使用者選購並瀏覽購買過後的電子書,整個項目是我獨立開發。

4.我參加教授的研究計畫、還有實習中遭遇到很多困難,可以自行解決的問題我會透過翻閱書籍,若還是無法解決才在網上詢問或是請教老師來解決問題。

5.除了課業與實習外,我也參與兩岸的學術交流營隊,是至XXX大學參加兩岸IT學術交流營,在交流營中我學習到兩岸的IT科技、電信產業與電信發展史與以前相比有巨大的進步。

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下面是英文:

1.Good (morning / afternoon), professor. First let me introduce myself. My name is _______. I was brought up in ________, and I will graduate from________ University this year. 3 years of my college grade was not very top in my class thought, but I had fourth place and I achieved high grades in my programming courses.

2.In 2012, I began to develop the Native and Foreign Language Conversion System project based in PHP, HTML and JavaScript. This project can help foreign language learner learning easier.

3.My final project topic is about combination of computer vision and video game. This project had won the one place in contest of the department of information management. My campus internship project is children’s EBooks online system, users can buy and read EBooks online through this system. I am the only person to develop the entire system.

4.I meet a lot problems in projects I developed. And if I encounter problem, I find will answers from books or the Internet.

5.Beside the schoolwork and campus internship, I participate Taiwan and China information Technology academic exchanges Camp in _______University. I learn to Taiwan and China information technology having a tremendous progress.

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  • 6 年前
    最佳解答

    1. Good(), professor, I’m privileged to introduce myself. My name is _______. I grow up in _________, andI am going to graduatefrom________University this year. 3 years of my college grade was not very top in my classthought, but I had fourth place and I achieved high grades in my programmingcourses.Throughmy college year, although I am not on the top of my class, butIhave been taking the lead frequently of the computer programming courses.

    2. I have contributed to develop PHP, HTML, andJavaScript based Native and Foreign Language Conversion System, one of myprofessor’s research projects during 2012. It is mainly designed for the foreign language compositions can be correctedby native instructor, and further enhances the language learning process. 3. My final project is to combine the computer vision and thevideo game controls together; and place the gamer selected character right intothe game scene. The project not only hadwon the first place in the departmental contest but also made it to the final NationalSoftware Contest Championship. My campusinternship is children’s EBooks’ online system. User may buy and read EBooks online through the system. It is my solo project to develop the entiresystem.

    4. I have met a lot of hurdles before, during, andafter those projects I have involved. Ialways take those issues head-on and find answers through the means of book,internet, and/or consulting people.

    5.Beside the schoolwork and campus internship, I participate Taiwan and Chinainformation Technology academic exchanges Camp in _______University. I have learned Taiwan and China Information Technologyand Electronic Communication Industry have been coming a long way.

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  • 4 年前

    如果是學生的話,一般學校外語中心都會提供這一類的免費英文潤稿服務。

    沒有的話,可以找外國朋友或是英文好的朋友修改,

    再不然就要找外面提供潤稿服務的翻譯社或公司了。

    如果要使用外面公司的話,推薦我常用的這間WORDVICE給你,

    我在國外念書工作,其實很需要這個服務,

    價格便宜所以可以時常用。你參考看看囉!

    http://wordvice.com.tw/

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    6 年前

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  • 6 年前

    下面的網址應該對你有幫助

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  • 6 年前

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  • 6 年前

    是要寫的?還是要上台演說的呢?

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