匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

如何改善英文作文

我們英文老師說我有一點 中式英文

雖然文法上都沒有大錯

但是有時候在文意上會被老師認為是中式英文

以下是我其中一篇日記

To my underclassmen : Recently , you must undergo the stress a lot . Not only do parents blame you for worse score of tests , but everyone feels that you indulged in the club. Tired as you are , I believe you can overcome the obstacles. Some of your partners leave , but the others still stay here. Moreover , there are some recruits participating. As the saying goes , '' no pains , no gains.'' The more you sacrifice for your dream , the more you will learn and gain. You sow what you reap. Remember that you aren't alone , your partners are hard-working with you.It's worth while to do what you want. They are not only your classmates but your family. Besides, you should encourage each other to make the show perfect. No matter what the show will be , the most important thing of all is the process which you get together to live through everything. As the time goes by , your friendship won't fade at all. Since you join in the tough mission , I hope that you can do your best. The few days are counting downwards. All you can do is try your best and you spare no effort doing everything.

似乎台台的

請你列出哪些文法的錯誤以及哪些台台的

然後幫我改正一下ˊ ˋ

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  • 6 年前
    最佳解答

    Sincerely, it isn't really anything about Chinese or Taiwanese style English (your ET is being nice),but an ostentatious, bumptious, disoriented and poorly-patched fashion as a-lot-to-say-about-nothing English composition that you call 'diary'.

    Throwing in a bunch of seeming classic sayings,idioms, phrases or expressions won’t necessarily make a good piece of work,letting alone being inundated with tons of grammatical errors.

    It's always the thoughts that matter. That is, thoughts come first, then, wording. Toss away vocabulary or idiom books. Do not read them for their own sake. Read novels. Read magazines. Read comics books. Read as much as possible and get ideas from them. Read between the lines from them. Read before you write. Listen before you speak. Absorb like a sponge. Read, read, read. Reading is the only key to your writing.

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  • 5 年前

    他之前遇到的問 題跟你一樣

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  • 6 年前

    看看他的方法

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  • 6 年前

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  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

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  • 6 年前

    "to my underclassmen" in you diary? Are you sure?

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  • Louis
    Lv 7
    6 年前

    建議你買一本英英辭典,每次要寫作時,先決定你句子裡要用的動詞,然後去查字典裡這動詞的習慣性表達方式,因為英文有「連用字」(collocation)的表達方式,你將字典例句裡的動詞表達方式套用,就可以避免中式英文的錯誤。形容詞和名詞也有固定的搭配,沒有把握,也查查字典確認。這是自學英語的初步方式。

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