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My name is xxx. I am 23 years old, studying in xxx University of Technology. There are five people in my family, including my parents, two young sisters, and me. My parents are busy with their jobs but they always go to travel with us in their free time. My family have invariably been my good companions in joy and in sorrow. Materially we are not rich, but spiritually we are.

The following are the motive why I choose Nation Taitung University. First of all, the reason of knowing Nation Taitung University that my sister studies in Early Childhood Education. When she went home, she always told me what life in Taitung. Therefore, I know there more precisely and I eager to experience the life in Taitung . Also, understanding my peculiarity and develop an interest in the research of leisure. I recognize that Nation Taitung University is the best choice to me.

I majored in Tourism and Leisure Management because I feel it interesting; in addition, I got the information that tourism have great development potential. I have got enthusiasm and envy performance to it. Moreover, I have obtained the Chinese guides for Certificates of Roadworthiness, the Bike Tour Management, MOS. Besides, in order to obtain the certificate of English, I studied English continuously after school and attended the pro-English curriculum initiated by Elite. To pass the TOEIC examination is my short-term target.

In my free time, I like reading the books, draw the knowledge of various fields, and in order to increase the professional knowledge also often participate in several and study course, keep the space that is studying and growing up constantly.

Finally, I want into Department of Cultural Resources and Leisure Industries .I would like to be a professional manager, so I choose Cultural Resources and Leisure Industries. In order to achieve it, I will accept all challenges and never give up. I believe that I will continue being an optimistic, initiative and positive person.

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Hope to have an opportunity to enter your institute sincerely, thank you for setting aside and reading emptily.

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  • 6 年前
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    修正如下,有問題請提出或自行再修正。

    My name is xxx. I am 23 years old, studying in xxx University of Technology. There are five people in my family, including my parents, two younger sisters, and me I. My parents are busy with their jobs but they always take time to go to travel with us in their free time. My family have invariably been being my good companions in joy and in sorrow. In Material we are not rich, but in spirit we are.

    The following are the motives of why I choose Nation Taitung University. The first reason of all, the reason of is when I knew from my sister who is studying in the Early Childhood Education Department of Nation Taitung University that my sister studies in Early Childhood Education. When she went home, she always told me what the life like in Taitung. Therefore, I know there more precisely and I was eager to experience the life in Taitung it . Also, understanding for my peculiarity and in developing the interest in research of leisure. So I recognized that Nation Taitung University is the best choice to me.

    The other reasons are I majored in Tourism and Leisure Management because I felt it is interesting, in addition, and I got the information knew that tourism has great development potential plus I have got enthusiasm and envy performance to it. Moreover, I have obtained the certificate of Chinese guides for Certificates of Roadworthiness, the Bike Tour Management, MOS. Besides, in order to obtain the certificate of English level, I studied English continuously after school and attended the pro-English curriculum initiated by Elite English cram-school to pass the TOEIC examination is my in short period-term target.

    In my free time, I like reading the books, draw to absorb the knowledge of various fields, and in order to increase the professional knowledge, I also often participated in several and study courses to keep the space that is steps of studying and growing up constantly and increasingly.

    2014-10-14 12:07:05 補充:

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    Finally, I want to get into Department of Cultural Resources and Leisure Industries to be a professional manager in the future, so I choose Cultural Resources and Leisure Industries. In order to achieve it,

    2014-10-14 12:07:14 補充:

    I will accept all challenges, never give up and continue to be an optimistic, initiative and positive person, and I hope to have the opportunity to enter your institute.

    Thank you for your time and attention.

    2014-10-14 12:14:08 補充:

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    So I recognized that Nation Taitung University is the best choice to me.

    請將recognized 去掉d ,回復成現在式。

  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    1. ... but they always go to travel with us in their free time.

    此句需要修改

    ... but they always take us to travel around in Taiwan in their free time.

  • 6 年前

    我叫XXX。我今年23歲,在科技的XXX大學學習。有五個人在我的家庭,包括我的父母,兩位年輕的姐妹們,和我。我的父母都忙於自己的工作,但他們總是與我們的旅行在他們的空閒時間。我的家人總是被我的快樂和憂愁良好的同伴。實質上,我們並不富裕,但精神上我們。

    以下是我為什麼選擇東國大學的動機。首先,了解國家台東大學幼兒教育是我妹妹的研究的原因。當她回家時,她總是告訴我什麼樣的生活在台東。因此,我知道有更確切的,我渴望體驗生活在台東。此外,了解我的特點和發展的興趣在休閒的研究。我承認,國台東大學對我來說是最好的選擇。

    我旅遊與休閒管理主修,因為我覺得它很有趣;此外,我得到的信息是旅遊業有很大的發展潛力。我有熱情和嫉妒的表現吧。此外,我已經獲得了中國導遊為汽車機械及格的單車遊管理,MOS證書。此外,為了獲得英語證書,我學英語學校後,連續參加了精英發起的親英語課程。要通過託業考試是我的短期目標。

    在我的空閒時間,我喜歡看書,汲取各方面的知識,以提高專業知識也經常參加一些學習過程中,不斷被學習和不斷成長的空間。

    最後,我想成為文化資源與休閒產業。我系想成為一個職業經理人,所以我選擇文化資源與休閒產業。為了實現這一目標,我將接受所有的挑戰,永不放棄。我相信,我會繼續做一個樂觀,主動性和積極的人。

    如果不正確的話可批評

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