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鴕鳥 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

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Figure 4-1 shows the mean systolic and diastolic blood pressure of the experimental group will increase with time, but after pressing the downward trend, while the control group after sham acupressure systolic and diastolic blood pressure change was not significant. Table 2 shows the experimental and control groups before and after pressing the changes in blood pressure after comparing the effectiveness of two pressing and. The experimental group of cases immediately after acupressure intervention, 15 points and 30 points systolic and diastolic blood pressure was significantly lower than the average pre-pressing, the paired-t test of significant differences (p <0.05), sham acupressure group of cases before and after the changes in blood pressure is not a significant difference (p> 0.05). After pressing further each time point were compared with the blood pressure difference between the value before pressing (Table 2), using independent t-test showed that the experimental group before and after acupressure average of systolic and diastolic blood pressure was significantly lower than the control group, and reach statistical significant difference (p <0.05).

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由圖4-1顯示實驗組之收縮壓與舒張壓之平均值會隨著按壓後時間的增加而有下降之趨勢,而對照組在假穴位按壓後收縮壓及舒張壓改變則不明顯。表2為實驗組與對照組按壓前後血壓變化及兩組按壓後成效之比較。實驗組個案在穴位按壓介入後立即、15分及30分之收縮壓及舒張壓平均值明顯低於按壓前,經paired-t檢定達顯著性差異(p < 0.05),對照組個案假穴位按壓前後血壓變化則沒有顯著性差異(p >0.05)

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。進一步比較兩組按壓後各時間點與按壓前的血壓差異值(表2),使用獨立t檢定,結果顯示實驗組在穴位按壓前後收縮壓及舒張壓降低的平均值明顯大於對照組,且達到統計顯著性差異(p < 0.05)。

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    Figure 4-1 shows the mean average systolic and diastolic blood pressures of the experimental group had a downward trend along with the increasing with of time, but after pressing compressing the downward trend, while the control contrast group’s after sham acupressure systolic and diastolic two blood pressures changing was were not significant after sham acupressure. Table 2 shows is the effect comparison of the experimental and control two groups’blood pressure variations before and after pressing compressing the changes in blood pressure after comparing the effectiveness of two pressing and. When immediately, 15 minutes and 30 minutes after acupressure intervention, the two kinds of blood pressures of the experimental group’s of cases will be immediately after acupressure intervention, 15 points minutes and 30 points minutes systolic and diastolic blood pressure was significantly lower than the average pre-pressing compressing ones, which has the paired-t test of a significant differences under the paired-t test (p <0.05), Before and after the sham acupressure of contrast group’ s of cases before and after, the changes in blood pressure is not had no a significant difference (p> 0.05). Further comparing the blood pressure difference of two groups, at each time point after compressingt, between before and after compressing After pressing further each time point were compared with the blood pressure difference between the value before pressing (Table 2), using independent t-test showed that the average decreasing figures of blood pressures of the experimental group before and after acupressure average of systolic and diastolic blood pressure was were significantly lower than the ones of control contrast group, and had reached the significant statistical significant difference (p <0.05).

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    When immediately, 15 minutes and 30 minutes after acupressure intervention, the two kinds of blood pressures of the experimental group’s cases will be significantly lower than the pre- compressing ones, which (have) significant (differences) under the paired-t test (p <0.05),

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