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Dear sir/Madam

Happy to know you! May we introduce ourselves as one of excellent quality mold companies in China. www.XXXXXXXX. Wish we can build a good relationship with you in near future.

We are from China Monicom, a mould-making company in Shenzhen China who specialize in manufacturing plastic injection mould, blow mould, die-casting and relative products. Quotation--design--mould manufacturing--components provide customer one step service in house.

Our factory built on 1980, from 1995, we started to export tooling overseas. Now each year, 1000 sets moulds are manufactured in house, more than 80% of our moulds are exported overseas, such as USA, Gemnany, Spain and other European countries. Without leakage, without flashes, keeping torolance... We get favorable praise from home and abroad. Hope we also have the chance to provide you high quality moulds with competitive price!

Sincerely hope to provide you best mould-making service!

Looking forward to you kind reply

Best regards.

Amy

Assistant Manager

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  • 5 年前
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    親愛的先生女士Dear Gentlemen and Ladies, 很高興認識你 !我們在中國介紹自己為一體的優質模具公司。www.XXXXXXXX.希望在不久的將來,我們能與您建立良好的關係。My best pleasure to know you! We are an excellent mold company in China with a website at www.XXXXXXXX. Hopefully, we will establish a harmoniously cooperative relationship soon. 我們是從中國 Monicom,在中國深圳人專注于製造注塑模具,吹塑模具、 壓鑄及相關產品的模具製作公司。報價 — — 設計 — — 模具製造 — — 元件提供客戶一步服務在房子。We are a Chinese company named Monicom located on in Shenzhen China with the speciality in mold injection, mold blowing, casting and mold manufacture for relevant products. Our services are available for design -- mold making -- components.

    本廠建于 1980 年,1995 年,我們開始出口海外模具。現在每 1000 年集模具製造的房子,我們的模具的 80%以上遠銷海外,如美國,Gemnany,西班牙和其他歐洲國家。無漏油、 無閃爍,保持 torolance......我們從國內外獲得了良好讚譽。希望我們也有機會為您提供高品質模具具有競爭力的價格 !Our factory was built in 1980. In 1995, we started exporting molds. Currently, we make 1000 sets molds every year wherein overall 80% of them are exported to some destinations like USA, German, Spain and other European countries. Our products are ensured of no oil leaking, no flashing, yet stable tolerance to win the best admiration from both local and international customers. We sincerely hope we can be honorable enough to provide our mold products with excellent quality and competing prices for esteemed you!

    真誠希望能為您提供最佳的模具製造服務 !We sincerely hope to provide you with our mold-making service of the best quality.

    期待你的回信Look forward to hearing from you soon.

    此致敬意。Truly yours,

    艾米助理經理AmyAssistant Manager

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  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    5 年前

    Dear Mr./Ms.,

    Happy to know you! May We introduce ourselves as one of are a excellent quality mold companies in China and our website is www.XXXXXXXX. Wish we have a strong desire to can build have a good relationship with you in near future.

    We are from China ,Monicom-a mould-making company in Shenzhen China, who specialize in manufacturing plastic injection mould, blow mould, die-casting and relative related products. In addition, we provide customers one step all-in one service(Quotation--design--mould manufacturing—components)

    Our factory established built on in 1980 and from 1995, we have started to exported tooling to overseas since 1995. Now each year, we make 1000 sets moulds every year are manufactured in house, more than 80% of our moulds them are exported to overseas, such as including USA, German, Spain and other European countries. We make the rules as “Without leakage, without flashes, keeping reasonable tolerance”. Furthermore, we get favorable praise comments all over the world from home and abroad. Hope we also look forward to your reply for further cooperation. . have the chance to provide you high quality moulds with competitive price!

    Sincerely hope to provide you best mould-making service!

    Looking forward to you kind reply

    Best regards.

    Amy

    Assistant Manager

  • 小咪
    Lv 6
    5 年前

    親愛的先生女士

    很高興認識你 !我們在中國介紹自己為一體的優質模具公司。www.XXXXXXXX.希望在不久的將來,我們能與您建立良好的關係。

    我們是從中國 Monicom,在中國深圳人專注于製造注塑模具,吹塑模具、 壓鑄及相關產品的模具製作公司。報價 — — 設計 — — 模具製造 — — 元件提供客戶一步服務在房子。

    本廠建于 1980 年,1995 年,我們開始出口海外模具。現在每 1000 年集模具製造的房子,我們的模具的 80%以上遠銷海外,如美國,Gemnany,西班牙和其他歐洲國家。無漏油、 無閃爍,保持 torolance......我們從國內外獲得了良好讚譽。希望我們也有機會為您提供高品質模具具有競爭力的價格 !

    真誠希望能為您提供最佳的模具製造服務 !

    期待你的回信

    此致敬意。

    艾米助理經理

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