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inboy 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 7 年前

請協助校正中翻英錯誤

可否幫忙協助求職中翻英的文法是否有誤. 謝謝

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您好,我叫鮑伯, 今年29歲。

我來自台北並且畢業於2004年.

至今為止,我已經累積了大約五年的工作經驗.

而我較熟悉的專案主題與開發技能,主要以Java語言為開發工具的專案.

我的工作經驗有包括金融資訊產業與手持通訊產業等所組成.

除此之外,我還有兩次的特殊工作經驗,是有關網路創業的經歷.

其一是有關國際貿易性質的產業,另一個則是有關美妝品牌經銷的產業.

因為工作上的需求我也自學取得了國際的PMP證照.當然我也對專案管理有著極大的興趣.

我認為工作除了滿足生活的基本需求,更是提供我們自我成長的地方.

也許我沒有相關的經驗,但是非常期待能成為貴公司的一員.

希望我有榮幸能進入貴公司,我一定會盡最大的努力達到公司的期望,以期能與公司一起成長。

以上,謝謝.

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Hello, my name is Bob, I have been 29 years old.I come from Taipei and I graduated in 2004.So far, I have accumulated experience about five years of work experience.

I'm more familiar with the themes and develop skills that is based on Java projects. My working experience has been gained from different jobs which include the financial information industry and handset communications industry.Besides, I have the special experience twice, that is related to start a business.One is the trade industry on international, and the other is related to cosmetics industry. Because of the need of work, I obtained the international PMP license by myself learning. Of course, I‘m also interesting in Project Management, too.

I think the work that is in addition to meet the basic needs of life, it is necessary to provide any growth of ourselves. Maybe I do not have related experience, but I highly expect to be one member of your company. I wish to be granted the honer to enter your company. I will do my best to full-fill company's expectations, so that I may grow with the company.

Above, Thank you.

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  • 匿名使用者
    7 年前
    最佳解答

    大大好,看到一開始的"簡單"的錯誤;(簡單 = 筆者的程度)

    I have been 29 years old.後面的內容,,過於複雜;

    建議大大改成"條列式"的敘述,

    好處是,看的人,可以挑著看;

    還有就是,寫的人,詞句的連結就沒那麼難了。以上 (簡單建議)

    好爸爸與帥兒子

  • 7 年前

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  • Hello, my name is Bob.

    I am 29 years old.

    I come from Taipei and I graduated in 2004.

    So far, I have had five years of work experience in this field.

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