鴕鳥
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鴕鳥 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 6 年前

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Theresults of this study support the hypothesis, confirmed Taichong acupressurecan reduce systolic and diastolic blood pressure in hypertensive patients, itis recommended Taichong pressing included hypertension care measures to enhancethe knowledge and skills of nurses care for hypertension cases.

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本研究結果支持研究假設,印證太衝穴穴位按壓能降低高血壓病患收縮壓及舒張壓,建議將太衝穴按壓納入高血壓照護措施,提升護理人員照護高血壓個案的知能。

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  • 6 年前
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    The results of this study supported the hypothesis, and confirmed (that) Taichong acupressure can lower systolic and diastolic blood pressures of hypertensive patients. The study also recommended that Taichong pressing be included in hypertension care education to enhance the knowledge and skills of nurses caring for hypertension cases.

    Notes:

    1. you cannot reduce BP's but you sure can "lower" them.

    2. use "be included in" to emphasize the conclusiveness.of the study.

  • 匿名使用者
    6 年前

    The results of this study support the hypothesis, confirmed Taichong acupressure can reduce systolic and diastolic blood pressure in hypertensive patients,

    2014-11-17 10:14:26 補充:

    it is recommended Taichong pressing included hypertension care measures to enhancethe knowledge and skills of nurses care for hypertension cases.

    2014-11-17 10:15:00 補充:

    以上還需要文法修正!!!

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