想請英文很好的好心人幫我糾正英文履歷(贈20點)

因為要去澳洲打工度假的關係,所以正在準備英文履歷

但因為小弟我英文不好,所以還想請英文很好的好心人幫我糾正一下

以下是我的履歷中英對照

(中文)

從高中開始,我就在家庭代工廠工作了10年,

工作的主要職責是包裝與搬運.

在勞力性質的工作上,我有自信能夠快速進入狀況,

並且準確達到公司的目標.

我願意做公司內任何職務並配合公司需求加班

希望我能有機會加入貴公司,感謝.

(英文)

From highschool, I was working in the domestic OEM for 10year,

the job main responsibilities are package and porterage.

In the labouring job, I have confidence can get into the state immediately,

and achieve the company goal exact.

I can do any position in the company and coordinate the company demand to work overtime,

I hope I have opportunity can join the company, thank you very much.

還麻煩了大家幫我糾正一下,小弟我非常感謝

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  • 5 年前
    最佳解答

    Since high school, I have been working in the domestic OEM for 10 years. My major duties are packing and transporting.

    As far as those jobs related to labor are concerned, I am confident of doing well in my position and attaining company's goal with great accuracy.

    I would love to play any role in the company and work overtime to consist with the company's demand.

    I hope I will be blessed to enter your company, thank you very much.

    上面文字的翻譯:

    自從高中開始,我已經在家庭代工場工作了10年

    我的職責主要是包裝和搬運

    有關於勞力的工作,我有自信能善盡職守並精準地達成公司的目標

    我很願意擔任公司內的任何角色,並加班來與公司的需求保持一致

    我希望我有榮幸能進入貴公司,非常感謝你

    英文沒很好,不過盡力了,有稍微修改一點,覺得可以就用吧

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