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The content of this book is to introduce the little caterpillar's whole life.

A small caterpillar emerges from an egg and begins eating everything.

After that it is no longer hungry and no longer small.

The big, fat caterpillar built a house around himself and finally into as a beautiful butterfly.

After reading this book, let me understand: those things to do now, is to wait for the moment of success.

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是為了確認自己想出來的意思和用英文寫出來的內容是否一樣。

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  • 5 年前
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    >如果可以的話,幫我翻譯一下吧

    若是自己寫的,為神要翻譯啊?

    2015-01-31 04:55:13 補充:

    錯誤多多,我就重寫吧。

    This book describes the life of a little caterpillar. A little caterpillar hatched from an egg. Being so hungry that she immediately started eating away. Crunched and chewed until she was no longer hungry, nor small no more. Then, she, the big and fat caterpillar built himself a big house to sleep in. Snored and slept, until she turned into a beautiful butterfly.

    This book tells me that you need to have a good sleep in a big house to be beautiful.

    醬寫可以嗎?

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