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Citron 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

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(1)In the event of accidents mentioned above occurs on board, the Master shall take immediate actions to respond to the critical situation.

(2)In the event of accidents mentioned above occurring on board, the Master shall take immediate actions to respond to the critical situation.

Which one is correct?

In fact, my only question is about the 8th word. Shall I use “occurs” or “occurring” ?

Thank you.

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    5 年前
    最佳解答

    (1)In the event of the accidents mentioned above occurs on board, the

    Master shall take immediate actions to respond to the critical situation. (X)

    (2)In the event of the accidents mentioned above occurring on board, the

    Master shall take immediate actions to respond to the critical situation. (O)

    Which one is correct?

    accidents要加冠詞the,因為是特定。

    第2句正確!

    因為:

    in the event of + 名詞 + 分詞片語;

    in the event that.... 才是帶出子句。

    第1句建議寫法:

    In the event that the accidents mentioned above occur on board, the

    Master shall take immediate actions to respond to the critical situation.

    注意: 動詞是occur而非occurs,因為主詞accidents是複數。

    參考資料: 羅莉 - 英文文法
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  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    5 年前

    In the event of accidents mentioned above AND occurring on board,----

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  • 5 年前

    (2)In the event of accidents mentioned above occurring on board, the Master shall take immediate actions to respond to the critical situation. ( O )

    在上述船上發生的事故時,船長應採取行動應對緊急情況。

    Which one is correct?

    In fact, my only question is about the 8th word. Shall I use “occurs” or “occurring” ?

    2015-02-06 12:38:30 補充:

    ☆個人愚見, 句子中的occurring字解如下:

    occurring 出現於; 發生於; 見於; 事件; 事故

    例: The oil is attacked by naturally (occurring)microbes which break it.

    原油受到了自然產生的分解油類物質的微生物的侵蝕。

    所以

    (2)In the event of accidents mentioned above occurring on board.....(O)

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  • 5 年前

    Both are verbose at best. I would do this:

    On the (re)occurrence of the aforementioned accidents on board, the Master shall respond to the situation immediately.

    2015-02-06 11:37:54 補充:

    On the presence of the Master of Universe, dare who interject any accidents of unknown?

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  • 5 年前

    In the event THAT THE accidents mentioned above OCCUR ......

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