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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

[英文]句子翻譯,想翻譯得比較順 文雅

"當你跌倒,不要急著爬起來,看看周圍有什麼(美麗的)東西可以把它撿起來。"

是這樣嗎?

"When you fall, don't hurry to get up,

look around what beautiful things you can pick it up."

還是

"When you fall, don't get up anxiously,

look around what something beautiful you can pick it up."

可否寫得順一點或文雅一點,有重要的東西需要這句話,

但又不知道怎麼翻文法會比較正確 比較順 比較好聽.

真心感謝

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    5 年前
    最佳解答

    是這樣嗎?

    "When you fall, don't hurry to get up,

    look around what beautiful things you can pick it up." (X)

    還是

    "When you fall, don't get up anxiously,

    look around what something beautiful you can pick it up." (X)

    Y

    兩句都有文法錯誤。建議訂正如下:

    When you fall, don't hurry to get up;

    look around for any beautiful things you can pick up.

    When you fall, don't hurry to get up;

    look around for anything beautiful you can pick up.

    When you fall, don't hurry to get up;

    look around for what you can pick up.

    重點:

    1)第一句句尾逗號改分號,英文兩個完整句子不可僅以逗號連接。可用分號或加連接詞,或乾脆用句號另起一句。

    2)around在這裡是副詞,要加介系詞for才可以有受詞。

    3)what是內含先行詞的關代,無需與things並用。你可用any beautiful things, 或anything beautiful, 或只用what.

    4)pick的受詞就是前面的things/anything/what, 不可重複加受詞it.

    參考資料: 羅莉 - 英文文法
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  • 匿名使用者
    5 年前

    "When you fall down, don't rush to get back up,

    look around what beautiful things you can pick it up."

    When you fall down ,don't rush to pick yourseslf up ,look around what beautiful things you can pick it up.(the wisdom of life is belong to you,no one else can take it away)

    Don't make the same mistakes again.

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  • 5 年前

    有泥巴可以順便玩一玩就更超酷了!

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  • 5 年前

    When you fall, just look around for something beautiful, there's no hurry of standing up.

    參考資料: 自己
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  • 5 年前

    When you fall

    ,don't just want to get up anxiously

    ,just look around and find if there is something beautiful that you could pick it up.

    (提供您做參考,若有新想法會立刻補上來的~~希望有幫助到您呦~)

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