A Valentine's Day is a special day. It also my birthday. I was born on Valentine's Day. It's Twenty-seventh birthday cake of my life. Tiramisu still my favorite cake. I like it's delicious prefer it simple appearance without any embellishment. I have always been single. I'm lonely but I'm not alone. I am thankful for my family and friends to share every minute in my life. I'm happiness with theirs love. I look forward to a look, a heartbeat, a hug, a kiss, and the only man.I wish you all Happy Valentine's Day. Happy Birthday to Me.
- Dr DolittleLv 45 年前最佳解答
Valentine's Day is not only a special day, but also it's my birthday
the very day I was born. My twenty-seventh birthday cake is
still Tiramisu, which is my favorite cake of all time. I like not
only its deliciousness, especially prefer its simplicity with
no need of décor. Even I have always been single, I'm lonely but
I'm not alone, just being thankful that my family and friends who
are there sharing every meaningful moment in my life. I'm so
happy being loved the way it feels.
For making a b-day wish, I expect a hug, a kiss, making eye
contact with someone special who is the one and only of my life.
Happy Birthday to me, and happy Valentine's day to all of you!參考資料： best wishes for your B day and all!
- 5 年前
- LouisLv 75 年前
You put too many topics into your paragraph!
- 呆子Lv 75 年前
The Valentine's Day is my twenty-seventh birthday and we ate my favorite cake, Tiramisu. It tasted delicious without any decoration. I am still single but not lonely. I feel glad to share every moment with my family and friends for ever love.
2015-02-15 13:51:58 補充：
I look forward to an eye-contact, a hug, a kiss from them. I wish all of you to have a Happy Valentine's Day.
- 5 年前
Valentine's Day is a special day. It is also my birthday. I was born on Valentine's Day. It's the Twenty-seventh birthday cake of my life. Tiramisu is still my favorite cake. I like it's delicious taste ,but, i also prefer it’s simple appearance without any embellishment. I have always been single. I'm lonely but I'm not alone. I am thankful for my family and friends to share every minute in my life. I'm happy with theirs love. I am looking forward to a look, a heartbeat, a hug, a kiss, and the only one in my life. I wish you all Happy Valentine's Day, Happy Birthday to Me too.
2015-02-15 06:21:03 補充：
就算文法沒問題 外國老師也可能會給你個 B+ (80%)
大大需要整篇改嗎？參考資料： 我自己, myself
- prisoner26535Lv 75 年前
錯誤是只有1,2個 但是讀起來 整體性弱,很片段!