A Red Dot 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

幫我看英文內容文法及用詞是否有誤

A Valentine's Day is a special day. It also my birthday. I was born on Valentine's Day. It's Twenty-seventh birthday cake of my life. Tiramisu still my favorite cake. I like it's delicious prefer it simple appearance without any embellishment. I have always been single. I'm lonely but I'm not alone. I am thankful for my family and friends to share every minute in my life. I'm happiness with theirs love. I look forward to a look, a heartbeat, a hug, a kiss, and the only man.I wish you all Happy Valentine's Day. Happy Birthday to Me.

情人節是個特別的節日,這一天也是我的生日。我出生在情人節,這是我人生中的第二十七個生日蛋糕。它仍然是我最愛的提拉米蘇。我喜歡它的美味更喜歡它簡單無需任何點綴的外表。我一直都是單身,我寂寞但不孤獨。我心懷感恩與家人與朋友分享的每一分每一秒。我很幸福擁有家人和朋友的愛。我期待一個眼神、一個心跳、一個擁抱、一個親吻和生命中的唯一。祝福大家情人節快樂,祝福我生日快樂。

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  • 5 年前
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    情人節是個特別的節日,這一天也是我的生日。我出生在情人節,這是我人生中的第二十七個生日蛋糕。它仍然是我最愛的提拉米蘇。我喜歡它的美味更喜歡它簡單無需任何點綴的外表。我一直都是單身,我寂寞但不孤獨。我心懷感恩與家人與朋友分享的每一分每一秒。我很幸福擁有家人和朋友的愛。我期待一個眼神、一個心跳、一個擁抱、一個親吻和生命中的唯一。祝福大家情人節快樂,祝福我生日快樂。

    Valentine's Day is not only a special day, but also it's my birthday

    the very day I was born. My twenty-seventh birthday cake is

    still Tiramisu, which is my favorite cake of all time. I like not

    only its deliciousness, especially prefer its simplicity with

    no need of décor. Even I have always been single, I'm lonely but

    I'm not alone, just being thankful that my family and friends who

    are there sharing every meaningful moment in my life. I'm so

    happy being loved the way it feels.

    For making a b-day wish, I expect a hug, a kiss, making eye

    contact with someone special who is the one and only of my life.

    Happy Birthday to me, and happy Valentine's day to all of you!

    參考資料: best wishes for your B day and all!
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  • 5 年前

    自從失戀後,看到路上成雙成對,就格外放閃,嘴巴瀟灑說只是少一個人來愛,但不可否認還是希望可以多多認識新的朋友,

    往認真爬文3個月以上,終於找到隱藏在網路中,傳說中的李姐,

    在今年3月初就預約來找,果然是口碑相傳,不做廣告的,我排第3次就遇到雙方非常有感覺的,目前是暫停排約,

    李姐那邊可以暫停排約1次,會員時間可以展延拉長時間,也在這段時間可以觀察對方.

    推薦給有需要的朋友參考

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  • Louis
    Lv 7
    5 年前

    寫文章和講話不同,通常一個段落只能有一個主旨(topic),

    You put too many topics into your paragraph!

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  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    5 年前

    The Valentine's Day is my twenty-seventh birthday and we ate my favorite cake, Tiramisu. It tasted delicious without any decoration. I am still single but not lonely. I feel glad to share every moment with my family and friends for ever love.

    2015-02-15 13:51:58 補充:

    I look forward to an eye-contact, a hug, a kiss from them. I wish all of you to have a Happy Valentine's Day.

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  • 5 年前

    Valentine's Day is a special day. It is also my birthday. I was born on Valentine's Day. It's the Twenty-seventh birthday cake of my life. Tiramisu is still my favorite cake. I like it's delicious taste ,but, i also prefer it’s simple appearance without any embellishment. I have always been single. I'm lonely but I'm not alone. I am thankful for my family and friends to share every minute in my life. I'm happy with theirs love. I am looking forward to a look, a heartbeat, a hug, a kiss, and the only one in my life. I wish you all Happy Valentine's Day, Happy Birthday to Me too.

    說實在的大大你錯的好離譜XDD

    錯好多喔

    大大用的是google翻譯吧~~

    2015-02-15 06:21:03 補充:

    我只改了基本的文法

    整體來說直接從中文翻到英文的作品質量並不是很好

    就算文法沒問題 外國老師也可能會給你個 B+ (80%)

    大大需要整篇改嗎?

    參考資料: 我自己, myself
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  • 5 年前

    錯誤是只有1,2個 但是讀起來 整體性弱,很片段!

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