The Intouchables Reviews
This movie is very nice, very funny. A newly arrived black is Philippe’s care. The black nurse had a criminal record. In general speaking, he should not be admitted into care, the next chance encounter have this opportunity to become Philippe 's care.
From here I think Philippe do it is good, He did not know he had a criminal record and not to admit him. Actually,he gave him the chance to try, I think a person's life might make a big mistake, But it does not mean that there will be no opportunity to turn over personal.
When I see this black care of Philippe,I know not just look outside.
Because fate, the two of them become good friend, make a good friend is really important, it can be your family, whenever you have a mind, he will definitely hear you say. I have always believed there is a saying : "God closes a door for you, he will certainly help you open a window." We are college students, In the life I also experienced many setbacks and pressure, do not let these things to push your momentum, You should turn it into a stepping stone towards your dream forward.
- BethLv 75 年前最佳解答
是有一些文法錯誤, 或是用字不精準導致我有一點點看不懂你原本想表達的意思. 不過還好我看過這片, 大概瞭解你想說的.
2015-04-30 11:18:11 補充：
This movie is very nice and very funny. A black man who was looking for a job was sent to take care of Philippe. The black nurse had a criminal record. Generally speaking, he should not be admitted into care, the next chance encounter have this opportunity to become Philippe 's care (這句看不懂你要表達什麼).
From here I think Philippe do it is good, He did not know he had a criminal record and not to admit him.(這邊也看不懂) Actually,he gave him a chance to try. (1)The black man might make some mistakes in his life, but that does not mean he doesn't deserve a chance to turn over a new leaf.
(2)From this movie, I know that we cannot judge someone only from his appearance. (3) Fate finally brought these two men to become good friends. It is really important to have a good friend in your life. Whenever you have something on your mind, he will be the one willing to listen.
我標示(1)(2)(3)這三句分別有三個訊息, 可是卻沒有好的transition. 放在一起有一點怪. 建議可以只針對一個重點, 更詳細的闡述, 或是一開始就提出我有三點感想, 分別是, (1), (2)和 (3), 這樣你的文章結構會更好.
I always believe, "When God closes a door, he opens a window." (這句話跟你下面想講的其實沒有關係, 建議換一句或是直接拿掉) In our lives, we often experience setbacks and pressure, but don't let them stop you. Obstacles can sometimes be stepping stones if you look at things on the brighter side.
2015-04-30 11:20:29 補充：
修正一下: he opens a window, 這裡的he 是指 God 要大寫: He
2015-04-30 11:21:43 補充：
don't let them stop you to pursuing your dreams.
2015-04-30 11:22:20 補充：
抱歉, don't let them stop you from pursuing your dreams. 才對
2015-04-30 13:31:55 補充：
A black man who was looking for a job was sent to take care of Philippe as a nurse. The black nurse had a criminal record. Normally speaking, he would not be accepted because of that. However, Philippe gave him a chance due to some coincidences.
2015-04-30 13:32:39 補充：
第二句修正一下: The black man had a criminal record.
2015-04-30 13:38:54 補充：
From there, I think Philippe did a right thing. He recruited the black man even he knew the black man had a record.
2015-04-30 13:44:33 補充：
We college students also experience many setbacks and pressure. Don't let them defeated you. Don't let them discourage you. We should turn these obstacles into stepping stones and continue the trip toward your dreams.
2015-04-30 13:45:26 補充：
修正上面: Don't let them defeat you. (defeat沒有加 ed)
2015-04-30 14:09:04 補充：
We should turn these obstacles into stepping stones and continue the trip toward our dreams.