佩珊 邱 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

逆轉人生心得翻譯

The Intouchables Reviews

This movie is very nice, very funny. A newly arrived black is Philippe’s care. The black nurse had a criminal record. In general speaking, he should not be admitted into care, the next chance encounter have this opportunity to become Philippe 's care.

From here I think Philippe do it is good, He did not know he had a criminal record and not to admit him. Actually,he gave him the chance to try, I think a person's life might make a big mistake, But it does not mean that there will be no opportunity to turn over personal.

When I see this black care of Philippe,I know not just look outside.

Because fate, the two of them become good friend, make a good friend is really important, it can be your family, whenever you have a mind, he will definitely hear you say. I have always believed there is a saying : "God closes a door for you, he will certainly help you open a window." We are college students, In the life I also experienced many setbacks and pressure, do not let these things to push your momentum, You should turn it into a stepping stone towards your dream forward.

ps:各位大大好~這是我的影片心得,可以幫我看一下有沒有文法錯誤嗎?謝謝~越快越好,有點急~

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若有錯,可以幫我修正一下嗎?謝謝

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這影片非常好看,很搞笑,新來的一位黑人是飛利浦的看護,這位黑人看護有前科,一般來說應該不會被錄取成看護,是一個因緣際會下才有這個機會變成飛利浦的看護。

從這裏我就覺得飛利浦做得很對,他沒有因為知道他有前科就不錄取他,反倒給他有嘗試的機會,我覺得人一生可能會犯一次大錯,但並不代表那個人就沒有改過的機會。

還有看到這個黑人照顧飛利浦的樣子,我才知道人真的不可貌相,這個黑人真的把飛利浦照顧得很好。

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因為緣份,他們倆變成非常好的朋友。交一個好朋友真的很重要,它可以是你的家人,每當你有心事,他絕對會聽你說,我一直相信有一句俗話:「上帝為你關上一扇門,祂必定會幫你開一扇窗。」我們是大學生,在人生中也經歷許多挫折與壓力,別因為這些東西而打壓了你原本的衝勁,應該把它變成你的墊腳石,朝你的夢想前進。

因為字數超過限制,所以我分成兩段傳~

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  • Beth
    Lv 7
    5 年前
    最佳解答

    是有一些文法錯誤, 或是用字不精準導致我有一點點看不懂你原本想表達的意思. 不過還好我看過這片, 大概瞭解你想說的.

    2015-04-30 11:18:11 補充:

    This movie is very nice and very funny. A black man who was looking for a job was sent to take care of Philippe. The black nurse had a criminal record. Generally speaking, he should not be admitted into care, the next chance encounter have this opportunity to become Philippe 's care (這句看不懂你要表達什麼).

    From here I think Philippe do it is good, He did not know he had a criminal record and not to admit him.(這邊也看不懂) Actually,he gave him a chance to try. (1)The black man might make some mistakes in his life, but that does not mean he doesn't deserve a chance to turn over a new leaf.

    (2)From this movie, I know that we cannot judge someone only from his appearance. (3) Fate finally brought these two men to become good friends. It is really important to have a good friend in your life. Whenever you have something on your mind, he will be the one willing to listen.

    我標示(1)(2)(3)這三句分別有三個訊息, 可是卻沒有好的transition. 放在一起有一點怪. 建議可以只針對一個重點, 更詳細的闡述, 或是一開始就提出我有三點感想, 分別是, (1), (2)和 (3), 這樣你的文章結構會更好.

    I always believe, "When God closes a door, he opens a window." (這句話跟你下面想講的其實沒有關係, 建議換一句或是直接拿掉) In our lives, we often experience setbacks and pressure, but don't let them stop you. Obstacles can sometimes be stepping stones if you look at things on the brighter side.

    2015-04-30 11:20:29 補充:

    修正一下: he opens a window, 這裡的he 是指 God 要大寫: He

    2015-04-30 11:21:43 補充:

    don't let them stop you to pursuing your dreams.

    2015-04-30 11:22:20 補充:

    抱歉, don't let them stop you from pursuing your dreams. 才對

    2015-04-30 13:31:55 補充:

    A black man who was looking for a job was sent to take care of Philippe as a nurse. The black nurse had a criminal record. Normally speaking, he would not be accepted because of that. However, Philippe gave him a chance due to some coincidences.

    2015-04-30 13:32:39 補充:

    第二句修正一下: The black man had a criminal record.

    2015-04-30 13:38:54 補充:

    From there, I think Philippe did a right thing. He recruited the black man even he knew the black man had a record.

    2015-04-30 13:44:33 補充:

    We college students also experience many setbacks and pressure. Don't let them defeated you. Don't let them discourage you. We should turn these obstacles into stepping stones and continue the trip toward your dreams.

    2015-04-30 13:45:26 補充:

    修正上面: Don't let them defeat you. (defeat沒有加 ed)

    2015-04-30 14:09:04 補充:

    We should turn these obstacles into stepping stones and continue the trip toward our dreams.

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