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ghhjjgh 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

中文翻譯成英文題目

他ㄧ到辦公室就打開電腦查看電子郵件。

(A) On arriving at his office, he turned on the computer and checked his e-mail.

(B) He turned on the computer and checked his e-mail as soon as he had arrived at his office.

為甚麼A對B錯?

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  • 5 年前
    最佳解答

    Errors and corrections:-

    (A)participial phrase/phrase containing a gerund:-

    =On arriving at his office(=arriving)

    used only adjectivally to describe the subject"He'is Okay.

    (B)The past perfect tense here means

    =When two actions happened in the past one after another, we use the past perfect tense for the first action.

    =had arrived office------turned----checked

    =wrong by putting at the end of sentence; unless all use the simple past tense throughout for sequence of tense is Okay !

    hence A is correct, while B is incorrect.

    2015-05-09 02:20:06 補充:

    propoesed amendment:-(A) he-subj=arriving be used in Inverted sense=On arriving.(B) as soon as he was arriving by putting at end.

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  • 羅莉
    Lv 7
    5 年前

    他ㄧ到辦公室就打開電腦查看電子郵件。

    (A) On arriving at his office, he turned on the computer and checked

    his e-mail.

    (B) He turned on the computer and checked his e-mail as soon as he

    had arrived at his office.

    為甚麼A對B錯?

    had arrived 應改為 arrived.

    as soon as後面的瞬間動詞不可用完成式。

    就是這麼簡單。

    時間副詞子句放在句尾沒有問題。

    參考資料: 羅莉 - 英文文法
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  • 5 年前

    因為A的主詞he are 省路,且正在進行中,用arriving,一般中文敘述,在英文就要用倒裝句開頭,而非B的 寫法

    B可改成 As soon as he is arriving at his office ,he turned on the computer and

    checked his e-mail

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