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狐狸點子 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

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stay close to his parents. This would have enabled His Majesty, amidst his busy public schedule, to oversee his son's scholarly progress and to help him to understand his princely duties on a more personal basis. If this would not have been possible, then at least Lady Sonhui, to whom the successful development of this son was a primary purpose of life, could have kept him at her side and provided him with discipline and love. I feel strongly that if some sense of intimacy between parents and child had been maintained and if the Prince had not been left completely to the care of strangers, the situation would not have developed to that extreme.

這將賦予主上在他繁忙的公務日程中, 去監督他兒子的學術提升, 並幫助他在更多的個人基礎上了解他的王子職責的能力. 若這不可行, 那麼至少宣禧宮-對她而言這兒子的成功發展是人生的一個主要目的-可以留他在她身邊並供給他紀律和愛. 我強烈地感到如果父母和孩子之間的某種親密關係被維護了, 如果王子沒有完全地離開去讓陌生人照料, 情況就不會發展到那麼的極端.

In my opinion, there were two grievous and regrettable decisions made in those early years. The first was moving the infant Prince to Chosung Pavilion. The second was bringing in those peculiar and unpleasant ladies-in-waiting to care for him. One might say that this is just the narrow and prejudiced view of a woman. However, I mention it because I wish to trace actual causes. It happened that the previous occupant of Chosung Pavilion had been Queen Sonui. The Prince was moved there soon after she died.[*] Facing Chosung Pavilion was a house called Ch'wison Hall where Lady Chang had resided after her dethronement in kapsul (1694) and where she had practiced black magic to bring death to the saintly Queen Inhyon.[**] It is really strange that His Majesty placed the infant Prince, still in his cradle, in a desolate palace and turned the cursed former residence of Lady Chang into the kitchen in which food for the Prince was to be prepared.

在我看來, 那些早年的決策中有二個是令人悲痛及遺憾的. 第一是將年幼的王子移到儲承殿. 第二是將那些乖僻及討厭的官女們帶去照料他. 也許有人會說這只是一個女人的狹隘和偏見的觀點. 然而, 我提到它是因爲我希望查出實際的原因. 碰巧儲承殿前任居住者為宣懿王后. 王子在她死後不久就被移到那裡. 面對儲承殿的是一間稱為就善堂的房子, 廢妃張氏(禧嬪)曾於甲戌(1694)年她被罷黜後住在那兒, 並在那兒施行黑巫術詛咒品德高尚的仁顯王后的死亡.

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真的很奇怪, 主上將仍在襁褓中年幼王子放置在一個荒蕪的宮殿並將遭詛咒的張氏前住處變成準備王子食物的廚房.

But this was not all. After the three years of mourning for Queen Sonui, the ladies-inwaiting in her service were all sent out of the palace. When His Majesty was preparing the Crown Prince's establishment, he was very concerned with

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maintaining his image,

但這並非全部. 在宣禧宮三年喪之後, 服侍她的宮女們全部被送出宮. 當主上準備冊立世子時, 他非常關心維護自己的形象,

[*] Queen Sonui, King Kyongjong's second wife, died in 1730, and so five years had elapsed.

*宣懿王后, 景宗的第二任妻子, 死於1730年, 所以五年過去了.

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[**] Queen Inhyon was the wife of King Sukchong (r. 1674-1720), Yongjo's father. Although she was universally admired for her virtue, she could not bear Sukchong an heir. When Lady Chang, a secondary consort, bore him the long-awaited heir, Kyongjong, Sukchong banished

Queen Inhyon in 1690

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and made Lady Chang his queen. Sukchong came to regret this and reversed the situation in 1694, demoting Lady Chang to the rank of secondary consort and restoring Inhyon to the queenship. Queen Inhyon died in 1701. Her death was allegedly caused by Lady Chang's practice of black magic against

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against her. After several accomplices confessed to having participated in sorcery against Queen Inhyon, Lady Chang was put to death.

**仁顯王后為肅宗(1674-1720在位)-英祖的父親-的妻子. 雖然她的美德普遍受到讚揚, 但她無法為肅宗生下繼承人. 當張氏, 一位後宮生下了他期待已久的繼承人-景宗, 肅宗於1690年罷黜了仁顯王后並將張氏冊封為他的王妃. 1694年肅宗對此感到後悔並逆轉了形勢, 將張氏降為後宮嬪妃並恢復了仁顯的王后地位.

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仁顯王后死於1701年. 她的死據稱是因張氏施行黑巫術詛咒所致. 在幾個同夥招認施行巫術詛咒仁顯王后之後, 張氏被賜死.

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在宣禧宮三年喪之後, 宣禧宮應更正為 宣懿王后

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  • 5 年前
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    待在和父母接近的地方,這將賦予讓主上能夠在他繁忙的公務日時程中, 並在私人的基礎上,, 去監督他兒子的學術提升業上的進展, 並幫助他在更多的個人基礎上了解他的王子的職責的能力. 若這不可行能, 那麼至少宣禧宮-對她而言這兒子的成功發展是她人生的一個主要目的標-可以留他在她身邊並供給他紀律教養和愛. 我強烈地感到如果父母和孩子之間的某種一些親密關係感覺被維護了住,如果王子沒有完全地離開去讓陌生人照料, 情況就不會發展到那麼的極端.

    在我看來, 那些早年的決策中有二個項是令人悲痛及遺憾的. 第一項是將年幼嬰兒期的王子移到儲承殿. 第二項是將引進那些乖僻及討厭的官宮女們帶去照料他. 也許有人會說這只是一個女人的狹隘和偏見的觀點. 然而, 我提到它是因爲我希望查出實際的原因. 碰巧儲承殿前任居住者為宣懿王后. 王子在她死後不久就被移到那裡. 面對儲承殿的是一間稱為就善堂的房子, 廢妃張氏(禧嬪)曾於甲戌(1694)年她被罷黜後住在那兒, 她並在那兒施行黑巫術,詛咒品德高尚的仁顯王后的死亡. 真的很奇怪, 主上將仍在襁褓中尚年幼的王子放安置在一個荒蕪的宮殿並將遭詛咒的張氏以前的住處變成準備王子食物的廚房.

    但這並非全部. 在為宣懿王后守喪三年喪之後, 服侍她的宮女們全部被送出宮. 當主上準備冊立世子時, 他非常關心維護自己的形象,

    *宣懿王后, 景宗的第二任妻子, 死於1730年, 所以五年過去了.

    **仁顯王后為肅宗(1674-1720在位)-英祖的父親-的妻子. 雖然她的美德普遍受到天下的讚揚, 但她無法為肅宗生下繼承人. 當張氏— 一位後宮位第二順位的王妃—生下了他期待已久的繼承人-景宗, 肅宗於1690年罷黜了仁顯王后並將張氏冊封為他的王妃后. 1694年肅宗對此感到後悔並逆反轉了形勢, 將張氏降為後宮嬪妃, 並恢復了仁顯的王后地位. 仁顯王后死於1701年. 她的死據稱是因張氏施行使用黑巫術詛咒所致. 在幾個同夥招認施行使用巫術詛咒仁顯王后之後, 張氏被賜死.

    2015-07-14 13:45:29 補充:

    第一段"並在私人的基礎上,,"之"並"字,請刪除。

    2015-07-14 13:47:08 補充:

    好的,我了解。。。。。。。

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  • 5 年前

    嚴正聲明:

    這不是我的研究報告, 也不是我的作業, 我已經六十多歲, 退休十多年了. 我只是對朝鮮時代的人物和發生在他們身上的事很有興趣, 想弄清楚一本書的內容, 分享給同好及討論. 因此需要有人幫我修辭及訂正. 我本想低調進行, 因此以前一直以匿名發問. 希望不了解的朋友不要妄加揣測, 在發表你的意見之前請斟酌字句, 不要涉及人身攻擊, 謝謝.

    2015-07-14 12:53:37 補充:

    朝鮮英祖時代為清朝臣屬國, 因此朝鮮君主只能稱國王, 他的正室配偶為王妃, 其餘都是後宮, 因此將 secondary consort 翻譯為後宮(後宮也有很多等級). 這名詞(secondary consort)之前也出現過.

    2015-07-15 16:57:21 補充:

    好的,謝謝您.

    上面意見內容是一位對朝鮮歷史有深入研究的網友提供的. 她有一位好友是維基百科暱名為 "首醫女張德" 的作家, 也是對朝鮮歷史很有研究.

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