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Hello everyone . My Chinese name is XXX . My first shortcoming is courage . For example, I don't have courage with the teacher said my English very poor , so I could not understand what she said. My second shortcoming is shy . I can not take the initiative to talk with new classmates . but if we become... 顯示更多 Hello everyone .
My Chinese name is XXX .
My first shortcoming is courage .
For example, I don't have courage with the teacher said my English very poor , so I could not understand what she said.
My second shortcoming is shy . I can not take the initiative to talk with new classmates . but if we become friends ,I would be a good person to get along .


我是升高一的學生,但是程度沒有到很厲害...
所以請各位大大幫我檢查以上這段有沒有錯誤,
文法、單字有任何問題請提出,
簡單來說就是幫忙改一下這段,
謝謝哦~

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謝謝各位大大 =)
更新: 2.My first shortcoming is I am easy to nervous.
Especially when the person told me in English,
I would be nervous to cold sweats.
Because I don't understand what they said.
更新 2: 3.My second shortcoming is picky eaters.
I know it is not good,so I will try to improve.
As for My advantage is that compliance with the commitments.
As long as I promised, I will try to achieve this commitment.
更新 3: 這篇也想請各位大大幫忙檢查ˊˇˋ
謝謝囉=)
更新 4: 這是老師規定的0.0
老師規定要講自己的優缺點030
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