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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 4 年前

急!!!英文文法檢查

Hello everyone .

My Chinese name is XXX .

My first shortcoming is courage .

For example, I don't have courage with the teacher said my English very poor , so I could not understand what she said.

My second shortcoming is shy . I can not take the initiative to talk with new classmates . but if we become friends ,I would be a good person to get along .

我是升高一的學生,但是程度沒有到很厲害...

所以請各位大大幫我檢查以上這段有沒有錯誤,

文法、單字有任何問題請提出,

簡單來說就是幫忙改一下這段,

謝謝哦~

還有下半部晚點會上傳~

謝謝各位大大 =)

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2.My first shortcoming is I am easy to nervous.

Especially when the person told me in English,

I would be nervous to cold sweats.

Because I don't understand what they said.

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3.My second shortcoming is picky eaters.

I know it is not good,so I will try to improve.

As for My advantage is that compliance with the commitments.

As long as I promised, I will try to achieve this commitment.

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這篇也想請各位大大幫忙檢查ˊˇˋ

謝謝囉=)

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這是老師規定的0.0

老師規定要講自己的優缺點030

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  • 4 年前
    最佳解答

    Hello everyone,

    My name is XXX .

    My first weakness is short supply of courage when it is needed.

    I don't have enough courage to tell the teacher that she spoke Greek to me.

    My second weakness is being too shy . I cannot take the initiative to talk with new classmates . But once we become friends ,I would be a good person to get along with.

    還有下半部晚點會上傳~

    2015-07-29 22:59:19 補充:

    My 3rd weakness is that I am easy to get nervous.

    Especially when the person speaks to me in English,

    I will be nervous to have cold sweats because I most likely will not understand what they say.

    2015-07-29 23:01:38 補充:

    My 4th is being finicky.

    I know it is not good, but it has been how I kept myself mean and lean.

    2015-07-29 23:04:12 補充:

    However, I am also a girl of many strengths.

    I am super good at keeping my word.

    I do what I say, nothing less than that.

    2015-07-29 23:08:24 補充:

    But above all, I am super brainy and super cute.

    These alone will make me a super rich millionaire when I grow up for sure.

  • Louis
    Lv 7
    4 年前

    shy是缺點,但courage不是(timidity才是)。為什麼要在演講裡向大眾公開你自己的缺點呢?

  • 4 年前

    Error and correction in checking the Grammar:-

    Hello everyone.

    My Chinese name is XXX.

    My first shortcoming is courage.

    For example, I don't have courage with the teacher (to say) my English (is) very poor.So I could not understand what she said. "Bravery" is needed.

    My second shortcoming is shy. I can not take the initiative to talk with new classmates.( I am a little awkward in company.)But if we become friends, I would be a good person to get along with.

    2015-08-01 02:22:10 補充:

    I 'll be keeping my word--my promise--my activities.Have a strong body+mind;strong will,imagination; and determination;THX

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