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EXERCISE 3: Editing

Reading this post to a class electronic bulletin board. There are eleven mistakes in the use of the simple present and the present progressive. The first mistake is already corrected. Find and correct ten more.

Hi, everybody. I write this note to introduce myself to you, my classmates in English 047. Our teacher is wanting a profile from each us. At first I was confused by this assignment because my English dictionary is defining profile as “a side view of someone’s head.” I thought, “Why does she wants that? She sees my head every day!” Then I saw the next definition: “a short description of a person’s life and character.” OK, then. Here is my profile:

My name is Peter Holzer. Some of my friends are calling me Pay-Ha because that is how my initials actually sounding in German. I am study English here in Miami because I want to attend the Aspen Institute of International Leadership in Colorado. Maybe are you asking yourself, “Why he wants to leave Miami for Colorado?” The answer is snow! I am coming from Austria, so I love to ski. It’s part of my identity. In fact, my nickname in my family is Blitz (lightning) because always I’m trying to improve my speed.

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(1) I write→ I’m writing

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  • 4 年前
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    Hi, everybody. I write [(1) I write -> I am writing] this note to introduce myself to you, my classmates in English 047.

    Our teacher is wanting [(2) Our teacher is wanting -> Our teacher wanted] a profile from each us.

    At first I was confused by this assignment because my English dictionary is defining [(3) is defining -> defines] profile as “a side view of someone’s head.”

    I thought, “Why does she wants [(4) wants -> want] that? She sees my head every day!”

    Then I saw the next definition: “a short description of a person’s life and character.” OK, then. Here is my profile:

    My name is Peter Holzer. Some of my friends are calling [(5) are calling -> call] me Pay-Ha because that is how my initials actually sounding [(6) sounding -> sound] in German.

    I am study [(7) study -> studying] English here in Miami because I want to attend the Aspen Institute of International Leadership in Colorado.

    Maybe are you [(8) are you -> you are] asking yourself, “Why he wants [(9) he wants -> does he want] to leave Miami for Colorado?”

    The answer is snow! I am coming [(10) am coming -> came] from Austria, so I love to ski.

    It’s part of my identity. In fact, my nickname in my family is Blitz (lightning) because always I’m [(11) always I'm -> I'm always] trying to improve my speed.

    • Duncan4 年前檢舉

      (2) Our teacher [wants] a profile from each "of" us.
      (10) I [come] from Austria,
      (11) because I [always try] to improve

      note: use simple present for adverbs (always, every day, often, ...)

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