小歐辣 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

短文改錯 請幫我找出10個錯誤 I was borned in Taiwan in 1985.I have moved to America with my parents last month.?

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We went to many places and buyed many postcards.Last week,we meted Aunt Tracy of the department store.She were my mom's classmate in high school .She got married about 15 years ago and comes to America.Yesterday ,we had a picnic in the park together.There has a lot of beautiful flowers.They were pretty and colorful.We took many pictures and we had a lot of fun.This morning ,I woke up in 6A.M .I didn't feel good.

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My mom took me see the doctor .The doctor gave my some medicine and wanted me to take a good rest.

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  • 5 年前
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    I was borned (1- born) in Taiwan in 1985 (2 - 1985? you are an old baby). I have (3 - delete have) moved to America (4 - United States, not America) with my parents last month.

    We went to many places and buyed (5 - bought) many postcards. Last week,we meted (6 - met) Aunt Tracy of (7 - at) the department store. She were (8 - was) my mom's classmate in high school . She got married about 15 years ago and comes (9 - came) to America (10 - United States).Yesterday ,we had a picnic in the park together. There has (11 - were) a lot of beautiful flowers. They were pretty and colorful. We took many pictures and we had a lot of fun. This morning ,I woke up in (12 - at) 6A.M . I didn't feel good.

    My mom took me see (13 - to see) the doctor . The doctor gave my some medicine (14 - you don't need medicine for cold) and wanted me to take a good rest.

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