個人簡歷 中翻英,請各位幫幫忙看看我的破英文?

請各位幫幫忙看看我的破英文,這是我個人簡歷

我想表示的大概內容是

我畢業於南台科技大學行銷流通系,在畢業後就業於寶雅美妝雜貨連鎖店約四年,但因為工作壓力太大我離職前往澳洲打工度假,度假期間我從事了中餐廳/導遊工作,我熱愛工作於澳洲希望能有機會增強英文,聽說讀寫各科皆達6分以上,目前自我評估寫作是我的最大落點,希望這次在菲律賓語言學校學習可以流利的使用英文.

My name is Jessica, 28 years old. I came from Kaohsiung, Taiwan, a wonderful city of great weather.

My undergraduate program was accomplished in Southern Taiwan University of Science and Technology in June, 2009 and majoring in Marketing and Logistics Management.

I have three working experiences after graduating from university, one is a grocery chain store, a Chinese restaurant kitchen hand and a tour guide, I felt high pressure when I work in grocery chain store, so I decided to change my life, apply a working holiday Visa to go to Australia, it was part of glorious time in my life, I made a lot of friends that come from different country enemy got a great job there, so I wish to go there again.

And now I am here to improve my English, my destination is getting IELTS 6 point every each, and writing is the biggest weakness to me I hope I can use English fluent in the future.

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  • 4 年前
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    1.中語與英語的內容有相當大的差別.我就看著辦吧!

    2.說自己因為工作壓力大而離職?希望你這個簡歷不是用來找工作的吧!

    I am Jessica, 28 years old, and from Kaohsiung, Taiwan, a wonderful city well known for its great weather.

    I earned my undergraduate degree in Marketing and Logistics Management from Nantai University of Science and Technology in June 2009.

    Since then, I have worked for Baoya Cosmetics chain stores for four years. After that, I went abroad to Australia in a work holiday program to work in a chinese restaurant, then in a travel agent as a tour guide. Along the way, I experienced western culture and made a lot of good friends. I enjoyed the journey so much that I plan to do it again.

    What I am looking for right now is to improve my English skills. My nominal targets are to pass IELTS point 6 level in reading, listening and writing. I also realized that wiring might have been my weakest and I hope that this program here can help me in that particular area.

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