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寫一封說服父母的信,信中提出具體的理由來說服他們接納你的想法 必須以Jack 在信末署名 我的文章: Dear Mother and Father, I know that you don’t like me participating in school music club, and you think that it’s a waste of time. You worry about my grades, so you forbade me to join that. In addition, you regard the club’s members as bed students, since their... 顯示更多 寫一封說服父母的信,信中提出具體的理由來說服他們接納你的想法
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我的文章:
Dear Mother and Father,
I know that you don’t like me participating in school music club, and you think that it’s a waste of time. You worry about my grades, so you forbade me to join that. In addition, you regard the club’s members as bed students, since their academic performance isn’t good. Nevertheless, I want to tell you an important thing. That is, I will not drop out of this music club. I promise you if you agree me to stay in the club, my grades will not become poorer. What’s more, my grades might reach a record high! The reason why I took part in such a club is that I’m interested in music and it can free my anxiety or relieve my stress. As a result, my academic performance may improve. On the contrary, if you don’t agree with me, I will find no way to release my pressure, which results in a bad performance in school.
Those friends I made from this music club, is not as bad as you think. Poor as their academic performance is, they are good at other talents. For instance, one of my friends in the club, Mike, not only do he play the trumpet well, but he is also good at swimming. They have a lot of advantages which I can learn from. Friends come in all shapes and sizes, and I can broaden my horizon by getting along with them. Last but not least, I have found myself in this club, so I’m happy. I know what I really what. Please agree with me, I will not let you down!
Best regards
Jack
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