Alice 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 4 年前

英文工作經歷 麻煩各位大大幫忙確認文法?

Dear 各位大大,小妹文法不是很強,麻煩幫我看下文法是否有誤

Work Experience:

 xx Co.,Ltd. Apr.2012 – Sep.2015

Purchasing Executive

.Coordinates purchasing plans with manufacturing and development new vendors assure supply chain are operation.

. Handle full set of import & export shipping are available in schedule and contact with vendor be avoid transportation delay in orders.

 xx Inc. Nov.2009 – Mar.2012

Purchasing Executive

. Responsible for planning materials (iron and plastic..) 、compontens and equipments for all parts operating and including import & export shipping .

 xx Inc. Mar.2008 – Nov.2009

AutoCAD Operator

.Use graphics software to drawn and design a mold and acceptable arrange of the analyze the data.

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  • Jenkin
    Lv 7
    4 年前
    最佳解答

    一般寫履歷表都會設定為"過去時態"作為動詞。因為當你寫這信時基本都是"已成過去"總結報告式的列出內容,所以"動作"都是"過去發生"了的經驗。

    另外由於這平台的操作無法變動字體或變色,只好盡量保留你原文的寫法和句子編排,只把較為正確或好的寫法更正,你留意改動和用詞的寫法(有些你串錯字或用錯字或描述上變化形容較為實在的工作)

    內容中你用operation/operating其實不太明白你意思。跟你所描述的內容不"英文",唯有按那句的主旨或工作內容試修改用詞。

    另個Shipping亦是"很中文"的英文。Shipping在英文中寫成"名詞"是指運送/運輸,但你的工作的shipping似乎不是"運送"的工作而是保證按單的貨物或組件按時交收/送出接獲,對你工司來說這些是處理這些你公司需要零件或把貨品給客戶的shipment而不是物流運送公司的shipping.

    Apr.2012 – Sep.2015 Purchasing Executive

    Coordinated purchasing plans with manufacturing and sourcing new vendors to assure supply chain are effective for production.

    Handled full set of import & export shipment according to schedule and manage vendors be avoid transportation delay of orders.

    xx Inc. Nov.2009 – Mar.2012 Purchasing Executive

    Responsible for materials (metal and plastic..) planning, component and equipment for all parts acquisition and including import & export shipping.

    xx Inc. Mar.2008 – Nov.2009 AutoCAD Operator .

    Used graphics software to draw and design a mold and analyzed specification data to acceptable standards.

    [你原句acceptable arrange用中文也解不通:可接受的安排的分析數據?按我對工業繪圖員的工作認識,你是按設計和部件量度指引達至繪製合工業標準施工或原作件圖]

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