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發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 4 年前

HI~~有請英文大師幫我看看~謝謝!! I wrote down recipes for cook from Youtube. Could you please check if any incorrect? So far,do I had wrong grammar?@@?

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  • SC147
    Lv 6
    4 年前
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    Dear 凱,

    Your recipe was quite carefully written. Only a few minor mistakes are spotted :-

    Step 1 : cornstarch (X) => corn starch

    Step 2 : half hour (X - ∵This is actually "Chinglish") => half an hour

    Step 4 : 1 minutes (X) => 1 minute

    Step 5 : Fry them for 3 - 4 minutes each side. (X)

    => Fry them for 3 - 4 minutes, each side.

    Or , => Fry them for 3 - 4 minutes on each side.

    Step 8 : evenly coated (✓, but not so good, as you are going to coat the wings and not having " coated " them.)

    => coat evenly

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    One more suggestion :-

    It would be worthwhile to give an explanation on why you choose to

    " shallow-fry " the wings, instead of " deep-frying " them.

    * Your cartoon features + dialogue are certainly attractive and helpful!

    • 4 年前檢舉

      因為不想浪費太多油..根據YOUTUBE作者的教學..Don`t want to waste too much oil.(不管什麼油都是不可數或可數嗎??)

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  • 4 年前

    太感謝你了~~~~

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    • SC147
      Lv 6
      4 年前檢舉

      不管什麼「油」,都是不可數!
      That is why we say :
      too "much" oil, but NOT too "many" oil.

      * much -- to be used for things that are uncountable
      many -- to be used for things that are countable

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