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~~~~~~~~~~~~~小六英文作文~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 結尾急!!(請順便幫我修一下前面) 我是這麼寫的(結尾大概20~30字左右即可) ----------------------------------------------------- 題目: Children Should Play Online Games 第一段: Most parents don't let their children play online games. They think that if their children play online games, they will be stupid. However,... 顯示更多 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~小六英文作文~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
結尾急!!(請順便幫我修一下前面)
我是這麼寫的(結尾大概20~30字左右即可)
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題目: Children Should Play Online Games
第一段: Most parents don't let their children play online games. They think that if their children play online games, they will be stupid. However, I don't think so. I believe that children should play online games.
第二段: When my brother was four, he hadn't seen or played any online games. One day, a doctor told my mom that it is still important to play online games, because children have to learn how to communicate with others. Also, playing online games could teach children to be cooperative, and how to analyze which character is better. Furthermore, games like CS could also teach them concept of space, or the prevention of danger.
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更新: :小孩可以玩線上遊戲
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