柔康 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 4 年前

1有一句寫:a pilot and his pessenger were killed when the small plane they were flying in got distracted while taking a selfie.這一句居然有兩連接詞,為何?

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  • 4 年前
    最佳解答

    why not? 不但2個可以,3個,4個,5個都行.只是越來越不好讀,越來越醜就是了.

    例子:

    A pilot and his passenger were killed when the small plane they were flying in got distracted while taking a selfie before taking his final exam and after having twin babies.

  • 4 年前

     不但2個可以,3個,4個,5個都行

  • 4 年前

    可以有很多個連接詞,用連接詞可以讓句子變得更通順,也能展現你的英文程度

  • Simon
    Lv 5
    4 年前

    英文口語甚至正式寫作

    常是能省則省因此有幾

    個連接詞或是省略主詞、動詞、名詞等都有可能

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  • Louis
    Lv 7
    4 年前

    A pilot and his passenger were killed when the small plane (that) they were flying in got distracted while they were taking a selfie.

    主要子句:A pilot and his passenger were killed.

    副詞子句:when the small plane got distracted 修飾主句的述部,提供其時間點

    形容詞子句:(that) they were flying修飾前面的名詞plane,連接詞that因是子句裡的受詞,所以可省略

    副詞子句:while they were taking a selfie修飾副詞子句的述部,是供其時間點。they were必須標示出來,否則成了taking a selfie的是the small plane:小飛機在玩自拍?因為分詞構句邏輯上的主詞,是其修飾的句子的主詞時,才可省略,但本句不是)

    「句焦點」是主要子句(有個飛行員和乘客死亡了),其餘次要的資料,以修飾語形態放在句中。

    兩個連接詞(when/while)的用法無誤:用在副詞性質的子句上。

  • Jenkin
    Lv 7
    4 年前

    問得好,句子可以有兩個連接詞,只是問題連接的"前後文"是不是同一主角。

    現在這句的第一個連接" XX+YY were killed when the plane got distracted"還可以肯定是"那飛機受到干擾。

    但是第二個連接"while taking a selfie"句中沒有主詞,假如照句子的結構,while是連接前一句和後一句,那麼前一句的主詞是the small plane小型飛機,後句"自拍"的便是這"小型飛機"。

    全句意思是:

    一架小型飛機臨降落前正在自拍引致干擾導致機師和一名乘客被殺。

    我認為比較正確的寫法應該是:

    A pilot and his passenger were killed while taking a selfie got distracted and crashed the small plane they were flying in.

    內容中got distracted應該是指那"控制"飛機的機師被干擾,而不是那飛機被干擾,除非"某行為"導致飛機的功能被干擾才可以寫成the small plane got distracted.

    因此這句的基本結構和內容都是錯的。

    或者從寫作的立場,這句其實是由讀者"意會"內容,而不是由作者正確地"描述內容"。

    因為作者認為他自己在寫:

    a pilot and his passenger were killed

    while taking a selfie

    +

    when the small plane they were flying in got distracted by the selfie

  • 4 年前

    關於你的問題,這裡有別人問

    https://tw.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20...

    所以是可以兩個連接詞的。

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