急!!!請幫我修改英文句子~~?

Question

hallo everyone i m XXXXX

Today i told you about my prized possession

my prized possession is shoes

This pair of white shoes.38 Size and Simple design

i think it's very comfortable , and all-match

sometime I 'll go shopping Enjoy food with my girls

But white shoes stain easily so Most of the time it's in my room

我想也許有天我會穿著它和某個人約會.旅遊

走遍很多地方

i think It sounds great!my prized possession shoes and someone(ˊ這句這樣行嗎???

我覺得這聽起來很棒！有我喜愛的鞋子和我喜歡的人

大致上是以上的內容

我自己亂組的

下面幾句有中文的句子我完全不會翻

請幫幫我完善它

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我想也許有天我會穿著它和某個人約會.旅遊

Traveled many places

走遍很多地方

i think It sounds amazing .

我覺得這聽起來很棒！

只要翻譯這段就行了

Answer 1

最佳解答

Hello everyone！

I am XXXXX .

Today I would like to tell you something about a prize I received. It's a pair of white shoes： size 38, with simple design. It's very comfortable and all-match too.

Sometime later, I 'll wear them to go shopping and enjoy food with my girls. But white shoes stain easily.

So most of the time it's in my room.

I hope that some day, I would be wearing them to attend meetings, or go on tours with my friends to various places.

Doing all these with my favourite shoes as well as beloved friends, I think it really sounds great !

這是最後一段的原文，給你校對吧！--

「我想也許有天我會穿著它和某個人約會.旅遊 /走遍很多地方

我覺得這聽起來很棒！有我喜愛的鞋子和我喜歡的人 」

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Note ：-

prized possession ---

你意思是 你 possess a prize . 但西方人就會只用一個 "prize" 字來形容，或 "a prize I have received".

因為 possession (擁有)是當作 understood (大家都明白)的.

Answer 2

hallo everyone i m XXXXX

Today, I would like to tell you something about my prized possession

The prized possession of mine is my shoes

This pair of white shoes are of size38 and it has a simple design

i think they are very comfortable, and all-match

However, white shoes will be easily stained when I go shopping or have food with my friends

Thus, i leave them at my room most of the time.

I hope that I can hang out with someone wearing them one day.

Moreover, I wish I can travel to many counties or places with them.

I believe that it will be amazing to hang out with my beloved with my favourite shoes on.