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陽明 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 5 年前

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Factors in choosing a university

When students graduate from school, they will face a big question: how to choose a university? Some students may follow their parents’ opinions, so they do not decide by themselves, but others who want to choose on their own would think over some factors, such as the quality of professors, curriculum, and location.

First, many students choose a university by considering how the quality of professors. Good professors not only have experience teaching, but also real-world skills. They can teach their students a lot of knowledges.

Second, another common reason is curriculums because different schools offer different programs. Some well-known universities have more open curriculums, so students can have much flexibility to take the courses.

Finally, for some students, location is the most important factor. Some parents may request their children to choose a university near their home, but most of students want to live far away their homes. In addition, some of them will decide whether a university is in bustle of a big city, or a small rural town.

In conclusion, there are several factors for students to choose a university. However, the most important thing for them is to find what kinds of school fit them. If one follow his parents’ opinion and choose the university he does not want to attend, he will regret why he did not decided by himself. So if someone can follow his own steps to choose a university, he must have a wonderful college life.

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    Errors and corrections ,grammatically,are in brackets (----).

    All in present tenses,persons, no.....

    --When students graduate from schools, they will face a big question (of) how to choose a university(.) Some students may follow their parents' opinions, so (that) they (need) not decide by themselves. (But) others who want to choose on their own would think over some factors(:-)such as the quality of professors, curriculum, and location.

    ---Firstly, many students choose a university by considering how (are) the quality of professors. Good professors not only have (experienced)teaching, but also real-world (expertise n. =expert apparaisal, valuation, knowledge,skill and know-how). They can teach their students a lot of knowledge(-).

    ---Secondly,the common reason is (in) curriculums ,because different schools offer different programmes. Some well-known universities have more open curriculums, so students can have much (more) flexibility to take the courses.

    ---Finally, for some students, location is the most important factor. Some parents may request their children to choose a university near their homes; but most of students want to live far away (from) their homes. In addition, some of them will decide whether a university is in (the hustle-bustle) of a big city, or a small rural town.

    ---In conclusion, there are several factors for students to choose (from) a university. However, the most important thing for them is to find (out) what kind of (COLLEGES) fit them. If one follow (one's) parents' opinion and choose the university (one) does not want to attend, (one) will regret (later) why (one) did not decided by oneself. So if someone can follow one's own (measures) to choose a university, one (would) have a wonderful college life (for the promotion and dissemination of advanced learning, conferring degree and engaging in one's career.)

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