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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 4 年前

這是要寫給一位好友的離別文 請英文高手幫我鑑定跟糾正我的文法跟排句 或者有什麼更好的建議 也可以提供給我唷 謝謝?

To: someone

We also recognize that for some time

During this time I told you to get along, so I am very happy

No matter how it would be in the future

Wherever you might be on this earth.

My blessings are always next to you.

Very happy that we can meet

Have a nice trip

Hope to see you soon again.

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  • 4 年前
    最佳解答

    Error and Correction:-

    To someone (an eternity)

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    For Love is the fact remain

    The happiest thing you come remain

    How is your Eternity

    Your Earth like an Eternity

    My blessings to my love endears

    Joy to meet in living years

    This trip set you free

    Then remember me.

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    Errors and Corrections on the Romantic Poem:-

    To someone:-

    We shew love to each other some time

    At once I sent you my love along

    To think how it would be in future

    Whenever you might be on this earth

    My blessings are always with you

    And show how happy we can meet

    Have a nice trip, however vain(adjective)

    Hope to see you again.

  • 4 年前

    真的是寫得很糟糕!

    1.用字不當:

    A)"recognize"不行用在"朋友之間的"認識".

    B)"blessings "是長輩對後輩的"祝福/保佑".也不行用在朋友之間.

    C)" I told you to get along"就完全不知所云了!

    2.冗長:4,5,6行就是要表達長遠的祝福.

    3.空洞:像是陌生人寫得.

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