匿名使用者
匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 3 年前

求好心的英文高手,協助修改英文自傳?

It’s my pleasure to introduce myself.

My name is XX. I am XX years old. I come from a lot of airplanes taking off and landing place Taoyuan.

I am a optimistic, bright, and amiable person. I think smile is the best langue in the world. I graduated from XX University with major in Japanese language. During my university life, I have go to Japan’s University as a short time exchange student, from which I understand different cultures and customs, and getting acquainted with different friends. I learned how to help each other, and be more independent.

l also had 3 years part-time experience at KFC in my university life.

In my part time experience the most impressive thing is handing hundred people activity at a nursery school with my coworkers. From which I know that everyone is necessary of a team, and I learned the communication skills for customer service is very important in job.

Now, I’m work in a technology corporation, and the position is Sales Assistant. From which I learn how to do problem solving and team work.

I also got the TOEIC certificate score 520 and Japanese-Language Proficiency Test with N1.I think these knowledge and skills will be useful for my future job as a flight attendant. I still believe that no matter what kind of job, the most important is passion and responsibility.

Thank you for your patience.

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  • 3 年前
    最佳解答

    我怎會認識醬子多空姐啊? 先批評一下:

    1. 你應該多使用艱難一點的字彙 才能顯示出你英語得程度

    2. 自介不是只要介紹你自己.要貼切地引入"為神 你比別人更適當"

    Greetings and salutations! It is my pleasure to introduce myself to you.

    My name is XX and I'm XX years old. I came from a place, Taoyuan, where close ties to the aviation industry are easily observed. Watching these gorgeous flying machines taking off and landing everyday, I made it my passion to accompany them for life.

    As a young girl, I have been optimistic, and shamelessly bright and amiable. Armed with an undergraduate degree in Japanese Literature from XX U, I also have smiles as my secrete weapons to conquer this world. To broaden my exposure to the world cultures, in college, I took advantage of the exchange student program and learned Japanese traditions and customs in details in Japan. Along the way, many good friends I have made. The diverse ways how they thought, how they worked, and even how they lived their lives continue and never cease amazing me. That experience alone deeply changed me in every way, subtle and otherwise, how I worked with others and made me more independent.

    In addition, I also moonlighted at KFC for 3 years. A difficult job that I handled very well was to organize catering for hundreds at a nursery school. From that I realized what an effective team was made of, and how critical communication skills were for customer service.

    Now, I’m working in a technology firm as a sales assistant where I practice problem solving skills and team work. Nonetheless, it is still my strong belief that passions and sense of responsibility prevail in any jobs. I would appreciate, later to have more time, in person, to tell you more about my adventures and what I learned from them in details.

    Thank you for your patience.

    Notes:

    follow-up questions from the interviewers:

    1. What makes an effective team? And an effective team member?

    2. What communication skills are critical to customer services? and why?

    3. How did diversity awareness change how you work with others?

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  • YIP
    Lv 7
    3 年前

    May I introduce myself. My name is XX.and XX years of age. I came from Taoyuan where the airport was situated. As regarding my characters, I am optimistic,bright and amiable that's why I am always smiling. I graduated from XX University and major in Japanese language. During my university period, I went to Japan’ as an exchange student where I learned their culture and customs and made acquaintance with some people to become friends.In addition, I learned how to help each other and being more independent. l also had 3 years' experience of being part-time job at KFC in my university period plus the experience of handing lots of activities at a kindergarten with my coworkers. From where I knew that teamwork and the communicative skills were very important. Now, I’m working in a technology corporation, as a Sales Assistant. From which I learned how to deal with technical problems and administration. I also got the TOEIC certificate which scored 520 and Japanese-Language Proficiency Test with N1. I thought these knowledge and skillfulness will be useful for my future job as flight attendant. I still believe that no matter what kind of job, the most important is passionate and responsible.

    Thank you for your patience.

    Yip

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