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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 3 年前

英文作文題目When I Feel Depressed 請高手指教,文法可能會錯很多 Our moods are like a roller coaster going up and down .And when l feel depressed,I would do 接著下面?

something interesting to relax myself.

One thing I usually do is went jogging.I usually see picturesque scene while I am jogging.Besides,I benefit a lot from the doing exercise,which makes me feel relaxed after a tiring day.And I also have another hobby for instance listening to music to relaxed myself when I was

ddepressed.With above ways that me released lots of

pressure and depression.

Line Q有人幫我改六點,學測英文14級分同學幫我改過兩句,不知還會不會錯很多,你們有Line Q嗎?Line Q回答可以用照片,你們看這個是不是要先寫好,在一個一個打上來?

像我今天查一個化學觀念,看到回答是12年前,就覺得這yahoo知識+過時了,很不好用,但如果google過有人有問過累似的就可以不用問了,前幾天我都在這拍照然後問數學,化學......,我覺得他們要先寫好在一個一個打上來,有時詳解很長,還耐得住性子跟我回答,他們都曾是考大學的考生,抱著以前別人回答我問題,今日我回答別人,回饋於社會

所以我能了解你們要我用打的想法,因為你們要先寫好在打上來,但我是考生,所以建議你們可以用Line Q,這樣你們也可以拍照直接傳給我,省很多時間,謝謝,我以後有空也會在Line Q上回答問題,因為自己受別人恩惠,以後就要換自己去幫別人

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  • 3 年前
    最佳解答

    Errors and Corrections:-

    -------And when I feel depressed, I would do something interesting to relax myself !

    -------On Jogging Experience:-eg:-

    ------>One thing I usually do is jogging along uneventfully from countryside to countryside, and watching the beautiful scenery along.

    ------->Besides, I benefit a lot from doing exercises when I move along slowly, shaking up and down or from side to side, jogging my elbow and knees, evaporating sweats, drinking French Bonaquor Water,and jogging my memory to make someone remember my jogging along uneventfully in the President Park TW through my arm-e-watch calculator siren-warning.Let that be a warning to you prisoners,lineQ,non-photographing,eye-balls falling days .This exercises make me feel relaxed after a tiring day.

    ------->My other hobby are listening to a beautiful piece of music by Beethoven and also classical music. And watching TV programmes whenever I feel depressed.With the above methods, I hope I can release a lot of pressure and depression when I feel depressed. And suffer not from acute depression anymore.(no of words=160)

    • TOMING88
      Lv 7
      3 年前檢舉

      THX.Let prisoners of war captured ,kept in a TW camp !

  • YIP
    Lv 7
    3 年前

    Topic:" When I feel depressed " In my daily life, I have lots to do, as a matter of fact that sometimes my mood is like a roller coaster going up and down and in case of something interested will make me relaxed.

    One thing I usually do is jogging.along and watching the beautiful scenery while I am jogging. Besides,I will benefit by doing exercises which makes me feel relaxed. Moreover, I have some hobby by myself for instance listening to music or watching TV so as to relaxed myself. Yip

    ddepressed.With above ways that me released lots of

    pressure and depression.

  • 3 年前

    不行不行!拍照以後就不好搜尋了啊!教授 就抓不住偷抄襲的壞學生了啊!

    所以真的不行耶!

    你寫得真是不好.就算文法錯誤改正了,內容也是 虛應故事 平淡無奇.

    也許你真的是"平均人"吧?或者是你活到現在都不曾受過"受不了,一定要跳下去了"的壓力吧?

  • 謝謝推薦 LINE Q的廣告好少好乾淨喔

    這個也可以直接拍照阿

    如果是我回答都是直接邊想邊打上來

    不會先寫好再打

    而且12年前有人回答也不代表現在就沒有人回答阿

    另外就是你寫的文章內容滿無趣的 所以比較難吸引人幫你改文法

    如果沒有特殊的內容的話 你需要增加一點熱情或幽默 來吸引眾人的眼睛

    而且你說得看起來像你有很多慢跑的經驗 那你對慢跑的想法應該不只這麼少可以和大家分享

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