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麻煩英文高手幫忙看看文法哪邊可以更改得更好,能流暢一點 感謝!! My name is Peter Hong who was born in Tainan City. My parents educated me to be an independent person .They also value it that children should be polite to people. I graduated from the Department of Computer and Communication of Kun Shan University.At schoole,I have learned... 顯示更多 麻煩英文高手幫忙看看文法哪邊可以更改得更好,能流暢一點 感謝!!

My name is Peter Hong who was born in Tainan City. My parents educated me to be an independent person .They also value it that children should be polite to people.

I graduated from the Department of Computer and Communication of Kun Shan University.At schoole,I have learned professions skills in computer.After serving in the army,I worked for one year as an attendant at the Wowprime in Taichung, through this position,let me learn how to interact with customers and provided excellent customer service.Besides,I also worked in department store as a sales associate,this work experience,not only trained my problem solving ability,
but also enhanced my professional knowledge about brand and sales techniques.

My friends tell me that i am a person who is optimistic and amiable.I have excellent people skills.i get along with almost everyone and i have no trouble getting to know new friends. From my viewpoint , it is important to treat everyone sincerely beacuse I also felt happy when I saw them smile with content.
That's the reason why I ike to serve people. In my free time , i like jogging,swimming or going to the gym. Regular exercise not only benefit every part of my body but also release my stress. About planning fot the ture,enhancing my language ability is the focus of my study. I hope my positive attitude will have the opportunity to work for your company. Thank you for your patience.I look forward to hearing from you again.
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