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~急~可以幫忙修改一下文章嗎?

可以幫忙修改一下以下的文章嗎(應該會錯很多),下面有中英對照,改英文的就可以了:

In the snowy night, the atmosphere of Christmas filled the whole town, everyone in the town are very excited about the day, a little girl standing in front of the window, enviously looking inside adults happy chat, children Excited to open just received the Christmas gift, and then look at the hands of the matchbox, which placed a few matchboxes, think of his father, could not help but beat a chill.

"If you did not sell the match, do not come back!"

The little girl sighed, helplessly facing the street still rush to the people brew their own matches, but not being treated coldly, is to turn a blind eye, the little girl to understand why adults will have this response, because they are catching After finishing the work, go home and family reunion.

A little sense of jealousy, budding in the little girl's heart.

在大雪紛飛的夜晚,聖誕節的氣氛洋溢著整個小鎮,小鎮裡的每個人都十分的興奮這一天到來,一個小女孩站在窗戶前面,羨慕的看著裡面的大人快樂的聊天,小孩興奮打開剛剛收到的耶誕節禮物,然後再看看自己手上的火柴盒,裡面擺著幾根火柴盒,想起父親講的話,忍不住打了個冷顫。

「如果妳沒把火柴給賣完,就別想回來!」

小女孩嘆了口氣,無奈的對著還在街上奔波的大人們堆銷著自己的火柴,可是不是被冷眼對待,就是視而不見,小女孩了解為什麼大人們會有這種回應,因為他們都趕著做完工作後,回家和家人團圓。

一個小小的忌妒感,在小女孩的心裡萌芽。

3 個解答

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  • 2 年前
    最佳解答

    In (a) snowy night, the atmosphere of Christmas filled (in) the whole town, everyone in the town (were) very excited about the day, a little girl standing in front of (a) window, (obviously) looking (at the adult’s happily chatting inside) (and) children (were) Excited to open the Christmas (gifts) (just received), (then she) (looked) at the matchbox (in her hands), (there were) a few matchboxes (placed in it), (and thinking) of (her) father, (which) could not help but beat (the) chill.

    "If you (do) not sell (out) the match, do not come back!"

    The little girl sighed, helplessly (bawled her matches to the people who was still rushing on the street), but (only) being treated coldly or got a blind eye, the little girl (understood) why (the) adults (had) this response, because they (were hurrying to) go home and (had a) family reunion.

    A little sense of jealousy budding (from) the little girl's heart.

  • 呆子
    Lv 7
    2 年前

    At the snowy night,Christmas atmosphere filled the whole town and everyone is very excited about this day.A little girl standing enviously in front of the window was looking at the adult to chat happily and the children to open the given gift. Then, she looked at the matchbox with a few matches in her hand. It reminds her of her father's talking. If she didn't sell the matches out, she was not allowed to enter her home. She suddenly felt chilly.The little girl signed and promoted her matches to the adult who rushed to cross the street. But she was treated with cold manner. She didn't know their feedback. Eventually,they rushed to home after work and got together with their family.

    A small jealous envy is arising from her deep mind.

  • Jenkin
    Lv 7
    2 年前

    原譯有些不太”中文”,可修改為:

    整個小鎮洋溢著聖誕節的氣氛 / 聖誕節的氣氛充滿整個小鎮

    羨慕的眼神注視著裡面的大人快樂的聊天

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