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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 年前

短篇寫作 建議 初級英檢試題?

這是初級英檢寫作的題目,有三張圖在描述去高雄拜訪親戚。請幫我看看有沒有什麼錯誤的地方和給我一點建議,非常謝謝您^^

Last week I went to visit my cousin Kate, who lives in Kaohsiung.

I arrived Kaohsiung in Friday afternoon, she was so kind to pick me up from station.

The next day was a rainy day, so we played card games all day.

Sunday's weather was perfect, we went to a beautiful beach to swim, then I went back to Taipei.

Time flies when you're staying with Kate, she is a really nice girl. Hope I can visit her again soon!

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  • Jenkin
    Lv 7
    2 年前
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    Last week I went to visit my cousin Kate, who lives in Kaohsiung. I arrived (AT) Kaohsiung in (THE) Friday afternoon, she was so kind to pick me up from (THE what?TRAIN) station. The next day was a rainy day, so we played card games all day. Sunday's weather was perfect, we went SWIMMING AT a beautiful beach, then I went back to Taipei. Time flies when I WAS (you're轉了主詞角色/口語這樣說還可以,但寫作/記述/表達評述便要留意統一寫的內容人物是你(I)) staying with Kate, she is a really nice girl. (口語省去主詞還可以,但寫作句子則不可) I HOPE I can visit her again soon!

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