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Good morning everyone, today I am going to talk about my third time traveling alone experience.

This is my first time go to southeast Asia, I didn't like the food from southeast country, so I ever think I will go there before.

however, I didn't have much money on this trip, and those pictures of the temples were really attractive to me at that time.

I wan arrived at Yogyakarta at noon on September 26th.

I had find some information on the internet about some customers will asking money from passengers.

Fortunately, I didn't run into any problem in the airport.

when I went out the airport, the first view to me was a crowd of cab drivers. Every driver was working so hard to fight for passengers.

But my plain was taking bus to downtown, I met a woman while I was finding the road to bus station, and she was so kind to help me.

I was the only foreigner in that bus.

先到這邊~ 麻煩您了!

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謝謝您^^

customers我想表達的是 海關

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Good morning everyone, today I am going to talk about my third experience to travel alone.

It was my first time going to Southeast Asia, for I didn't like those foods in Southeast countries. So I'd never thought I would go there before. However, I didn't have much money on that trip, and those pictures of the temples were really attractive to me at that time.

I arrived at Yogyakarta in the afternoon of September 26th. I'd ever found some informations on the internet that some customs staffs would ask for money from the passengers. Fortunately, I didn't get into any troubles in the airport.

When I stepped out of the airport, the first sight I could see was a crowd of cab drivers, every driver was trying so hard to catch/ fight for passengers. Yet my plans were going to downtown by bus. On the road to find the bus station, I met a woman who was so kind to help me, for I was the only foreigner on that bus.

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版大 您好！以上內容 僅供參考, 希望能幫上忙吧！謝謝!

另: 您在互聯網 搜尋到一些訊息, 🈶️些"customers"會向乘客要💰, 你想表達的是 什麼人呢？

👌 不客氣！^_^

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Answer 2

Let's tidy up and make the presentation a bit more presentable.

You must try go and make your presentation presentable.

(1)I arrived at Yogyakarta----

(2)about some solicitors who will ask money----

--When you make an event at which you describe or explain a trip your idea, you must write the series of presentations to help the readers-public fully understand your writing with evidence . It all depends on you.

Good luck.

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Answer 3

dont ask me

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