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用翻譯機翻的所以應該很怪..請幫我看看哪裡很不自然,謝謝! This suitcase is the most special object to me for many various reasons. This suitcase is not the most expensive object for me. Furthermore, it is not even a really beautiful, special suitcase. Just a common, hard, iron gray suitcase with wheels. However, this suitcase is priceless to... 顯示更多 用翻譯機翻的所以應該很怪..請幫我看看哪裡很不自然,謝謝!
This suitcase is the most special object to me for many various reasons. This suitcase is not the most expensive object for me. Furthermore, it is not even a really beautiful, special suitcase. Just a common, hard, iron gray suitcase with wheels. However, this suitcase is priceless to me. Because this suitcase was the first object that I bought with the money I earned from my part time job. I got this suitcase in Taipei in the summer of 2014 when I was nineteen. At the end of August of the same year, I took this suitcase went to Seoul, Korea. And that was my first solo overseas trip in my life. And on that trip, I met my Korean penpal for the first time. Then we become a lover from penpal, and that’s my first love. Of course, a lot of things happened afterwards. Anyway, this suitcase has been with me when I go a lot of places, and this suitcase accompanied me to experience a lot of things. Some time ago this suitcase wheel has a little problem, because I use it almost three years. When I knew it was malfunctioning and had to send it to the original repair, I really feel very sad. Probably because I no longer treat it as just an object, instead think of him or her as my travel companion or friend. Although he or she accompanied me for only three years, but I believe there will be many different kinds of travel in my life in the future. I believe he or she will always accompany me through my future journey.
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