這句英文這樣對嗎？

Question

please hold my hand tight if I saw you in heaven

麻煩請指正我，如果這句英文有任何錯誤

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prisoner26535你好：

那如果改 when I see you 或 when I meet you 可行嗎？

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2 個已更新項目:

或是類似句子：

I'll hold you tight when I see you in heaven 可以嗎？

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Answer 1

最佳解答

1. 唯一的錯誤是: saw 應該改成see.

2. if 也應該改成 when 比較好

3. please 也應該移除 比較好

4. 所以:

hold my hand tight when you see me in heaven.

5. 那如果改 when I see you 或 when I meet you 可行嗎？

yes

6. I'll hold you tight when I see you in heaven 可以嗎？

yes.

I will hold you tight and never let go when I see you in heaven.

Answer 2

Leave out "please"---

Hold

my hand tight

if--if clause is to indicate that an event is unlikely or improbable,not likely to be true or to happen as an improbable result which seems improbable;

I see you

in heaven----home of God and the saints; die and go to heaven !

Answer 3

Please hold my hand tight while you are in Heaven. Yip