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有高手可以幫我看看哪裡要改的嗎? Dear Sir My name is Xu Yuanshuo. My personality is independent and has good resistance to pressure. Therefore, I am confident that in the face of future tasks delivered by the company, I will be able to go all out and achieve my intended goals. I hope there is an opportunity To your company to... 顯示更多 有高手可以幫我看看哪裡要改的嗎?
Dear Sir
My name is Xu Yuanshuo. My personality is independent and has good resistance to pressure. Therefore, I am confident that in the face of future tasks delivered by the company, I will be able to go all out and achieve my intended goals. I hope there is an opportunity To your company to participate in the interview, explain their own work ability and expertise, the following is my personal autobiography.
Family background and personal qualities:
There are four members in the family, the father is the refinery operator, the mother is the family manager, and the younger brother is working on the quality control inspection at the technology company. Parents in their daily education always teach us to think about drinking water and cultivate our independent thinking and life skills. My strengths are the responsibility, sincerity, enthusiasm and flexibility in the work. Knowing that working hours can be arranged reasonably makes the work organized, more efficient, and able to work in a stressful working environment. My hobbies are reading biographical novels or watching comedy movies. Sometimes I use holiday activities to invite my friends to maintain my physical health.
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