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匿名使用者 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 2 年前

在下自傳中翻英部內容修改?

有高手可以幫我看看哪裡要改的嗎?

Dear Sir

My name is Xu Yuanshuo. My personality is independent and has good resistance to pressure. Therefore, I am confident that in the face of future tasks delivered by the company, I will be able to go all out and achieve my intended goals. I hope there is an opportunity To your company to participate in the interview, explain their own work ability and expertise, the following is my personal autobiography.

Family background and personal qualities:

There are four members in the family, the father is the refinery operator, the mother is the family manager, and the younger brother is working on the quality control inspection at the technology company. Parents in their daily education always teach us to think about drinking water and cultivate our independent thinking and life skills. My strengths are the responsibility, sincerity, enthusiasm and flexibility in the work. Knowing that working hours can be arranged reasonably makes the work organized, more efficient, and able to work in a stressful working environment. My hobbies are reading biographical novels or watching comedy movies. Sometimes I use holiday activities to invite my friends to maintain my physical health.

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  • 2 年前
    最佳解答

    括符內文字係修正處,請參考

    Dear Sir

    My name is Xu Yuanshuo. My personality is independent and has good resistance (compete with) pressure. Therefore, I am confident that (when) in the face of future tasks (which designated) by the company, I will be able to (deal with all of them) and achieve my intended goals. I hope ( I can have) an opportunity (to) participate in the interview (in your company)( to explain my own) work ability and expertise, the following is my personal autobiography.

    Family background and personal qualities:

    There are four members in (my) family, (my) father is (a) refinery operator, (mother) is the family manager(a housewife?), and (younger) brother is working (as a) quality control (inspector)(for a) technology company. Parents (are always) teach us to think about drinking water and cultivate our independent thinking and life skills. My strengths are (being responsible, sincere, enthusiastic and flexible) in the work. Knowing that working hours can be arranged reasonably (to make) the work organized, more efficient, and able to work in a stressful working environment. My hobbies are reading biographical novels or watching comedy movies. Sometimes I use holiday activities to invite my friends to maintain (our) physical health (together).

    • 非天使
      Lv 7
      2 年前檢舉

      has good resistance (to compete with) pressure
      請在compete 前加 to

  • YIP
    Lv 7
    2 年前

    My name is Xu Yuanshuo. In my family,there were four members my father was a refinery operator, mother an housewife, and younger brother a qualitative control inspector. Previously, my parents always taught us to behave ourselves.while my own characters are being responsible, sincere, enthusiastic and flexible. My hobbies are reading biographical novels or watching comedy movies. Sometimes, I spend my holidays to invite my friends to do exercises so as to improve physical health.My personality is independent and challenging. Therefore, I am confident that I will do the works delivered by the company and do hope that there would be an opportunity for promotion to more senior position in order to so as to do with all my might and expertise. Yip

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