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Steve·Jobs was very capricious from an early age.

Fortunately, his parents discovered(detect) this and were willing to adjust him and provide a good environment.

賈伯斯從小就非常任性,幸運的是,他的父母發現(察覺)了這一點,並願意去適應他,並給予良好的環境。

In the elementary school, Steve·Jobs was not a "good student". He often used mischief to kill his boredom and cause all kinds of trouble.His parents never punished him for his trouble,but understood him.

小學時期的賈伯斯,並不是一個“好學生”,經常用惡作劇來打發自己的無聊,惹各種各樣的麻煩,但父母從來沒有因為他闖禍而懲罰他,而是去理解他。

At the age of 17, he entered college as expected, but he chose Reed college, the most expensive school at that time.

Six months later, he suspension from school because he was tired of University's major courses, and thought that the university had spent a lot of money on their parents and had not learned anything.

17歲的賈伯斯如預期的進入大學就讀,但他選擇了當時最貴的學校—里德學院。 六個月後便休學了,因為他厭倦大學的主修課程後,認為大學花費父母的大量金錢又沒學到東西。

After he suspension from school, he did not give up studying. Instead, he stayed in school to listen to his favorite calligraphy lessons, laying the foundation for future inventions.休學後他並沒有放棄學習,而是留在學校中旁聽他喜歡的書法課,為日後的發明定下基礎。

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1976, Apple Company was established.

1985, the establishment of NeXT.

1986, founded Pixar Animation Studios.

1996, Steve·Jos went back to APPLE again.

The 7 time he was chosen to be the cover of TIME

7次被選為“時代雜誌”封面

He was considered the most successful businessman in the world.

他被認為是當時全世界最成功的商人

2007, Fortune was rated the strongest businessman of the year.

被“財星雜誌”評為年度最強商人

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  • 11 個月前
    最佳解答

    2007, Fortune was rated "Him" the strongest Businessman of the year.

    Errors&corrections:-

    Steve Jobs was a (very changeable sort of boy) from an early age. Fortunately, his parents (became aware of) this&were willing to (adapt sometimes)&provided him a good environment.

    For elementary school,Steve Jobs was not a "good student", often used mischief to pass his own boredom, causing all kinds of troubles.His parents never punished for his trouble but to understand him.

    At 17 aged, he entered College as expected, yet he chose Reed College, the most expensive college at that time.

    Six months later, he was suspended because he was tired of U's major courses, and thought that the U had asked a lot of money from his parents and had not learnt anything.

    After his suspension, he did not give up studying. Instead, he stayed in College to join audience "in the speakers"to his favorite calligraphy lessons, laying the foundation for his future inventions.

  • 匿名使用者
    11 個月前

    呦倎叜

    人生起起浮浮,有一帆風順的時候

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  • 匿名使用者
    11 個月前

    偂儇凍呮厩貸款的申辦如何去查詢利率低又快速

    先來講講真實發生在我身上的故事

    後面會提供給你最後我怎麼解決的方法

    我之前是因為有卡債的問題,因為被自己的好朋友推銷鼓吹我刷卡買了很多商品

    商品卻被上線拿走,從此消失找不到人,所以就積欠下龐大的債務

    一開始不敢讓家人知道,所以每個月我都繳「最低應繳金額」,一開始還能應付

    但信用卡的利息有多恐怖我想大家都知道,後來連生活都過不下去

    越欠越大,連最低應繳也繳不出來了…

    那時每天上班都要躲著同事才敢接銀行的電話,每一通都是打來催繳卡費的

    我有試著跟銀行協商,但是我們不夠專業根本不會跟銀行談判

    所以協商後的金額還是超過我的能力負擔,利息就不斷的越滾越大…

    人說狗急就會跳牆……

    後來實在繳不出錢來,一開始我找了一家在台中的債務代辦公司

    每月固定要繳一筆處理費,然後由他們代替我接銀行催繳電話,結果拖一年都沒處理好

    加上有天我好奇就打了那支電話(我給代辦公司的號碼)才發現他們是利用

    (1)不接銀行電話 (2)假裝沒錢裝可憐 (3)用拖延戰術,能拖就拖~等等

    一堆破壞你信用的方法,說是這樣銀行才會給你債務打折,現在想起來真是太後悔了!

    所以忠心建議千萬不要隨便亂找外面不知名的代辦公司毀了自己的信用!

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  • YIP
    Lv 7
    11 個月前

    Adjustments: It was ever since childhood, Steve Jobs had been rather naughty then, fortunately his parents understood that trying to provide with private tutor. In the elementary school, Steve Jobs was not a good student and he caused a lot of troubles by making mischiefs with others so as to reduce his bori; but his parents neither scolded nor punished him for that. When he was 17 and was admitted to study in Reed college, the most expensive at that time; and because being tiring of the majored courses and didn't want to spent too much, so he suspended for the time being. As far as hobby being concerned, he didn't give up studying and stayed in that college for the sake of calligraphy lesson with which being the basis of invention. Yip

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