鴻昌 發問時間: 社會與文化語言 · 4 個月前

自我介紹英文的文法?

文法有錯的話請改正並說明原因

My name is jack, my interest is listening music, listening music can calm my mood, o,I like the sport is badminton, my personality is very kind, and also like to make friends,with friends when I will feel very happy, I like to travel very much, travel can go to different places to see different scenery, but also have the opportunity, to make friends indifferent places.

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  • 4 個月前

    1.錯誤很多.幾乎所有的逗點 都應該是句點.

    2.更改如下:

    My name is jack, (句點)

    (大寫) my interest is listening music,

    interest 不能醬子用.改成:

    My hobby is music.

    My hobby is listening to music.

    I like music.

    (大寫) listening music can calm my mood, 

    改成:

    Listening to music makes me calm.

    Music makes me calm.

    Music calms me.

    o, (這是神東東啊?)

    I like the sport is badminton, 

    改成:

    The sports I like is badminton.

    I like to play badminton.

    my personality is very kind, and also like to make friends,

    改成:我看你也是很愛吹牛 很不謙虛.

    I am super very number one kind and like to make friends. 

    with friends when I will feel very happy, 

    改成:

    I enjoy being with my friends.

    I enjoy the companionship of all of my friends.

    I like to travel very much, (句點)

    travel can go to different places to see different scenery, but also have the opportunity, to make friends indifferent places.

    這一句真的是超錯誤的.

    改成:Traveling brings me to many places so that I can enjoy different scenery and make many new friends of many different cultures.

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